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for The Unwilling Love!

by bubblegumcrisis

person lOVE IT
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hope you updata vey soon it is getting good.
person Shaeya Sedjet Namir
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I like the story so far. It reminds me of one of my favorite romance novels *blush* I have a nit-picky comment, though. You said that she rubbed at her skin and scratched herself so hard that she had "welps". A whelp is a puppy, not a raised wound. The word you were looking for is "welt". I thought you might want to know for future reference...hehe...But she WILL be having a whelp very soon, ne? Keep up the good work!
person mia
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
best story i've read so far.....SO FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ok thats all i wanted to say *smiles*



person Relix
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story. i just hope there would be at least one more lemon scene with sweet love.. :)
person Nina
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the way the story is going. Keep it up. You're doing a great job. You've got me hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person Lizzie
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Erugh that was so cheesey but I'm glad you had them fall for each other. Or whatever you call it. Falling in love with each other. Yeah, that's it. Anyway, good chapt! ^^
person CY
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story!!!! I love it!!
person maria
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far. But I was expecting Inu to have to suffer a little bit after what he put Kagome through. What are you going to do about Kikyou? PLEASE tell me that she dies a painful death. I hate that bitch!
person Suzuko
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D
person New Fan
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very cute chapter. Update soon.