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by badkittie

schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW!!! This is getting soooo good!!!! I luv it!!!! Please update soon!!!! ^_^
person Feminafures
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, thanx for the shout out, you're the best!
I won't complain about cliffies this time...lol. I would love a sequel, though, when you have time of course. I know how it feels to have projects up the wazoo, I don't have too much time for writing either.

Gia
person Shiro Ryu
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!!!!! I can't for for the resolution!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!! Oh, and I would not be opposed to a sequel even if it were a one shot! Thank you for all your hard work. ^__^
person loner
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a pretty good story and it flows well.
You give the characters life with your words and you have an interesting plot,
you did a good job on it.

p.s. So when are you planning to update "Frozen"?
person ThatsMsDiva2U
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope they find Kagome soon and hope she's not harmed.
person REDEYES
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gosh!! I love this fic!! The only problem, you need to update faster!!!! I know, we can't have our cake and eat it too!!
person LadyOrion
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW yes i did wait untill i read it all to review :D sorry.
I loved it and you are evil with the cliffy and all.
I love com compexity with which you have created
your world. Please contuie soon. Each and every
sensual sceen is great it has the swarms of butterflies
in my stomach swirling LOL. Great stuff and I want you
to know how talented you are. Yeah!
'Orion
person Shadiyaray
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The suspense is killing me. Please hurry.

Shady!
person BillySkater
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi again if u gave sess another car u should either give him a lamborghini gallardo which they only made 250 a year i think because sess is so big in money or u should give him a lamborghini murciealago (don't know if i spell'd that right) or a ferrari ok out of cars an onto the but but if u do change sess's car or give him another one give him a lamborghini just for me please i love lamborghini's ok the updates where amazing i can't wait till u update again ok well g2g for now can't wait till the next update
Ja ne
BillySkater
person amyfushigiyugi
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow i love this chappy and to tell the truth i'm even glad kouga is alive. it makes it even better.
i will hold my breath and wait on a update.
A+++++ fiction