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for Mini-Miko

by MarilynR

person vegetasgirl
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey that was rilly cute and yougot my attention please write more k thaqnks bye
person Mija
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lmaooo omg that was like the best chapter..totally loved it..and awwwwwww everyone had dreams of squishing Kagome but in all of them excepts Kagomes Inu was out for blood to kill those who had squished his mini love awwwwwwwww ya gotta love it and yeeeeeeeeeesssssssssss continue please?? pretty please???? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Mija
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was too funny Mini Miko...gotta love it and I sooooooo cant wait to see how Inu and the gang react to a tiny version of Kagome..will Inu take advantage of it?? like keep her with him in his robes or something and not let her leave and stuff?? ooh must know please update really really soon this is good huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person megami
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wohoo this is great I see angst in this fics future, I wanna know what inu's reactions gonna be when he finds out, though I must admit I wasn't expecting kagome to be so small, I thought she'd be chibified not just shrunk. hey maybe you could have the speel gradually wear off over the course of a couple weeks or something, that way you can have kagome at various sizes. oh well its just a suggestion
person Alijandrah
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe... "Grope-Grope THUD".... yeah, I think that sums it up pretty well. Clever, original, adn downright kawaii story, and I hope to see more!
person Sei
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If you keep writing, your spelling and grammar will probably improve (^_^) As far as content, this seems to be a cute start. I am rather curious about the travels of a miniature sized Kagome...in the feudal era...with a lot of demons. Poor Shippou. He will be in charge of Kagome until the others return.
person satans_pet_tiger
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooo i love it! keep going i wanna see that doll maker person get squished instead!
person Caliko
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YES! LOL.. an original story line! I love the normal plots to death, but sometimes you just want something NEW and DIFFERENT! Look for an email from me...
Caliko
person ME
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far, I like it!! shouroovroove for some interesting situations!!! update soon!!
person No One Knows
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really Awesome story so far!! I love it! When Kagome got hit with the lightning all I could think of was the Mario Kart lightning attack

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