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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stoy.....BUT U NEED TO FINISH!!!! Dammit.
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story liked it alot be nice you finish it.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plz do more finish
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is actually turning out to be really nice. I think it'd be a shame for you to stop, since I see quite a bit of potential here, both story-wise and content-wise. Here's hoping you do keep on writing for this story and I'll keep checking back to hopefully see an update; so keep on going! ^_^
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was pretty good for a first story!
Since I'm a size buff, as long as you keep her small, I'll keep on reading!
Since I'm a size buff, as long as you keep her small, I'll keep on reading!
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!! Thats Sooo Good Keep Writing!!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dat was really awesome, really creative not like all the others dat i read. keep goin!
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing! I would really appreciate you continuing... it's very original! ^_^ Please, please, update soon! I look forward to reading the next chapter!
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hell ya you should keep going that was very interesting I want to read what happens next come on please continue.'Inner voice' "Be nice or they wont continue."Shut the hell up you damn inner voice I don't want to here this again."You know what you have to do."Alright fine if it will shut you fuckn mouth I'm sorry will you please continue with the story.*said through clenched teeth* "Alright much better ."Now will you shut the fuck up and get out of my head you damn inner voice."Yes bye for now."Damn it it's gonna come back again well better get prepared see ya.
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that made me laugh sooo hard. squishy dreams indeed! keep going!