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for Unbreak My Heart

by angelstars

person Dunbarbalooie2
schedule November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good story from what I've read so far, but there is a problem. Both chapters 6 and 7 are corrupted for some reason and are missing the last halfs to each. You can tell that it is because of a broken html tag in 6 since you can see part of it, but in 7 it just stops at the end of a paragraph. I hope that you fix the chapters and update soon, I really want to read more.
person Lady Banshee 999
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but between Chap. 6 and 7 there seems to be a chapter missing. It went from Shippou wanting to know the truth and Kaede's death to foreplay. That's a big leap there. (lol.)

Hope to get to read the missing chapter(s). TTFN! Lady Banshee 999
person aaaaa
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god just end it let sess kill inyuasha or somthing i mean i dont care if ur the most emotional person in the world or ice hearted creep ur not going to be a dumbass like inyuasha just let somone kill him or let kagome get with sess make inyuasha see how big of a fuck up he is an just commit sucided of somthing i really am getting annoyed at how stupid he is fuck him
person inuhanyouelf
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kawaii! i loved this story and i can't wait to read more from you. you have written a wonderful story and should be proud of yourself. i found myself cheering when inuyasha and kagome adopted shippo-chan officially anved ved how you made it all work! you have a wonderful story and i loved it so much! good job and keep up the great writing!
person Liz
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved it... great story... Shippo rocks...lol. I love the story alot... i'm adding it to my great story lists. Le kno know if you write more stories and stuff....


~Liz~
person unokitsune
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that is absolutely awesome, beautiful ending. Though I would so love it if Kagome had gotten pregnant. Oh, Shippou would have a brother and Souta would have a younger nephew or niece
person Lady Dragon
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry. I bow to you yet again.



***Love & ...........moe love***


~ Lady Dragon ~
person KagoKitty
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one word...
B
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A
UTIFUL!!
=^-.~^=
person Shiro Ryu
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story! Thank you very much for writing it! I look forward to reading any other stories you write in the future.
person kari
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww hehe i loved it :) your such a great writer hehe. you did such a great job writing this story, i feel deeply in love w/ it :).