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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BITCH
yOUR MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yOUR MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it is very interesting but how can u sop there! hope u update soon! Bye ^-^
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
happy most of you like it
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February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is confusing. We get the idea but it could be so much better with a beta reader.
Just put a authors note up for the second chapter and someone will step up to the plate.
It has potential but the way it is now is not very good. I think you can do better.
Just put a authors note up for the second chapter and someone will step up to the plate.
It has potential but the way it is now is not very good. I think you can do better.
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep it up
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story idea, but it was kind of confusing, you really need to get a beta reader.
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February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story but I think you need a beta