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person GgBg
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A new love for Sesshou? Planning on using him to re-establish the Wind Dog lines with her? I can hardly wait until your next chapter...okay I'm waiting:-) Update soon.
person Tinuviel IG
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! Go Tai! Royallt yot yourself, that's definately the way to fair lady's heart! *eherm* typos, saw a lot of 'em. Sorry! How often do you proofread? Just curious! I loved it all. It was great how you handled things, but I didn't think Kaede would die! Wah! Did Kikyo's sash awaken Hanna? So the star charm keeps Ura locked away and all, but what about Hanna? Does she get awakened on Kit's human night? Wouldn't that be kind of weird...a different person on that night than is present the entire month...hmmm...what was the scream that Kit heard and the pain, how did Kaede react to that if Kit actually doubled over or showed the pain that she was feeling? Oh, and I STILL can't get over Inu's goatee. Would his facial hair actually be black? I mean really....Oh well. It's good though, and I like the one pic with Inu and Kit when she's older. It's sweet. Continue, onegai!

Ja ne, Ruby-san!
person stella
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was so cute at the end, please send us more. i really love this story
person Waruagaki
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved Chapter 8. It was very cute. Can't wait for chapter 9!!!
person TLC
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man I was hoping after Inuyasha bravery and rescue of kitzumi you might a see A little lovin but know I just don't know I can't wait to see what else you have planned for this story. I wonder what the confrontation between Kagura & Sesshomaru is going to be.
person Albus the great
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have only one complaint that is it is not long enough I just love your writing and i hope you post more of this I was so hoping for some monu/Knu/Kag fluffness but I have a feeling when they realize how much they really me to each other it will be a incredable lemon. Update Soon
person Albino Elf
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow a Druken samurai that is afraid of demons I hope he doesn't try to hurt Inuyasha and a confrtiontion between Sesshomaru & Kagura sounds intersting.
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I missed chapter 7 review so here it is, I was really sadden to see Keade die but at least she protected Kitzumi until Inuyasha showed up. I just loved The Inu/Kag Fluffness.
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here is my Chapter 8 review, I really enjoyed the interaction between Kitzumi & Inuyasha in this chapter the nose touching and sleeping in Inu lap I was so giddy with that fluff. Well hopefully I will try and review as often as possible.
person Cold Demon Lord
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just can't wait to see to see what the journey to Owari is goio beo be like proably treacherous with Naranku after them and I just love the Inu/Kag moment in chapter 7.