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person Tinuviel IG
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Coolness, and no, it wasn't too short. Whoot, didn't see too many typos, either. I like the perspective with the new girl and Sesshou-maru-samar, Fr, Fluffy is such a hypocryte, he's lucky that Rin never hears him speak like that. COntinue, onegai!

Ja ne, Ruby-san!
person TLC
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the quick update, I was so proud of Sessy-Sama for protecting Rin. I want more Inu & Kag fluff and this Tai fellow really scares me.
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEA!! I am so glad you update this story so the meeting wasn't good for either parties. I can't wait for more!
person Ickabod119
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter SDR I am sorry about the IM the another day by moden blew on my laptop right as I wboutbout to answer I but I have a replaced and I would love to talk to you more about the story I will be on tommorrow night at 5:00 Mtn time I believe that is 7:00 Est. So please email me saying your not mad.
person Liz
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! I need more! You must email me when the next chappie is up! Email me at Punkswitchsk8er3@aol.com A.S.A.P or i'll be mad!!! Great picks by the way i'll put up a deviant watch on ya!

With much love
Huggles
~Liz~
person Kim
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful 9th chapter!! The story is building really well. Waiting with baited breathe for next chapter!!
person Anon
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm.. Why do I get the impression that the only reason Sesshoumaru was killed was that there is no obstacle for Inu/Kag's romance? No one to claim the child as his even should he want too. Bad story telling on your part if that is the case. There is a spiffy thing called the Tenseiga that prevents Sesshoumaru's death.
person StoneDragonRuby
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear Anon,

SESSHOUMARU IS NOT DEAD! He was attacked when Kagura turned him down, but he didn't die. Yes he was ready to accept death but he was still scared about it, it was to show that he was afriad of something for the first time. And yes even if he wante die die Tensseiga whould have saved him.

And no, Sesshoumaru is not being taken out of the story in order to promote an Inu/kag romance. He's going to be in the story up into the very end.

You should read the chapter over again, please. Mari-na saved his ass when he >>fainted<<.
Thank you for your insult and telling me that I'm a bad story teller.

SDR
person Creativity
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you have NO IDEA what I have been through trying to find this story since it was removed from FF.net. I've searched, I've e-mailed old reviewers of my story, and I even posted an announcement asking what happened! A bunch of people told me that it had been removed, but no one could tell me why or wheru'du'd moved it too, and for some reason I couldn't find your bio page. Finally, before the administrators removed my announcement, someone told me to to try typing in your name with no spaces and without the "ruby", and, lo and behold, here I am! I used to sit in school and wonder if you'd updated (I know, you think I'm pathetic, but to each her own!), and when I couldn't find the story it bothered me for a long time. I really love your story and I think it'ildiilding up to great things. Please keep updating. I'm not asking for a really quick chapter, or anything, but just knowing that your updating will keep me sane knowing I have something to do other than study for finals. Sorry that your story was removed, by the way, considering there are full out lemons still on there. Can't wait for next chapter! See ya.
person Liz
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::claps:: YAY!! Wonderful chappie! I wish to see the next one! I hope that you write it up soon. Once again... please email me the link when your next chappie is up!

With much love
Huggles
~Liz~