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person Elfling
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I know I say it each time I review, nut I lved this chapter! Not a writer, I wouldn't dream of trying to give suggestions. You've still got both Inuyasha and KAogome dead on though. I can only hope that my son turn out a cute as you've got Kohaku going right now. Please keep it up! Also, glad you got part one up. I'm directing a couple of my friends to your story, I know they\lovelove it!

Elfling
person Hot Otaku
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, come on!!! that cliffy wasn't cool!! i know i haven't reviewed your stories in a while, but that's just cuz i knew they'd be awesome anyway!!! bring it on baby!!!
person youkai tsuki
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! First of all, thank you for the email
to lt me know you updated. I really appreciate
it. I don't visit the site as much as I used to so it
I probably would have missed this chapter. Enough
with the cliffy, although I will forgive. But I anxiously
await your next chapter. If you need help with the idea
we talked about let me know, I'll be glad to listen and
give whatecer input I can offer. Happy writing.


youkai tsuki
person nia-chan
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well it looks like i will review on here and ff.net, dont worry everyone in my house is still going strong with this fic. i am like so obbsessed I was sad when there was no updates for a while....lol I loved this chapter but yes the cliff hanger really sucks bricks...... anyways, so i am wondering does kagome get to use her powers? does her daughter have miko powers ? and is there aconnection between kitsumi's hair color and kagome's miko powers? ) if this was explained already and i missed it i am so sorry gomen) well keep up the good work girl its great so far.......

Nia-chan~~~
person nia-chan
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHh I just remembered when ff.net erased the story I was so pissed i could spit nails!!!!! I had reviewed every single chapter for part one and two if I am not mistaken then they did that, I was SO HAPPY TO FIND IT ON HERE!!! you are one of the best authors i have seen in a while ,your fic has even helped me to over come some of my writers blockIf you see fics by nia-chan or niasdreams there mine !!! or on my website illuminated hearts..... well that said i am out till next time ....

Nia-chan~~
person stella
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
glad for the update. thought u forgot about us. great job once again. can't wait for the next chapter.
person lere
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WoW! What a fantastic chapter! It was worth the waiting! I just love the way Inuyasha is now. And he is back to action too; all the gang! I can't wao reo read about his little girl discovering what a good worrior he is and to see about Inu becoming the leader his father was once. Please, don't torture me again! Update soon! Please, please, please, pleeeeaseeee!!!!

Big hugs from Brazil!

Lere
person Elfling
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally found your works again! I was heartbroken when ff.net removed your stories. I had been reading a Lifetime Loving You since about chapter 12, and when I went to read it it simply wasn't there. I'm glad that you are still writing the story and plan on finishing it. Your characters are believable, both Rumiko's and your own. I cried through the whole end of part one!! Please continue, your art is truely enjoyable!

Elfling
person Manda
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates! I know what you mean about school, though *curses school under her breath* In any case, I really do enjoy this story, I hope there is some more limey interaction btw Kagome and Inuyasha soon (that's not interruppted by her daughter!) Seriously though, keep writing, and don't give up on this fic! It's great!
person Chase
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey hey! this is chase (author of simply irresistible) i think i need to checl this site more often so i know when you've updated lol. i got read like 5 chaps 2day so that was fun. i hope tai's actions towards kag make inuyasha confess his feelings. or incourage kitsumi to put a 'match-maker plan' into motion mwahahaha. kitsumi is such an intersting character. its going to be fun watching her 'grow' and what significance her new powers witld. ld. and my guess is that sesshy is going to fall for mari-na. they remind me of inu and kag when they fight rofl. either that or rin somehow becomes older and gets together with him. and i loved how you described the dragon flames! that was awesome! i could totally picture them in my mind and how the village burned to the ground. but poor kaede...she's an okay character (in the series) but still sad to have her die. well, i hope you update soon and i hope that'll remember to go to the site and look for the new chap. my email is new in case you didn't notice to email me at that address if you have any qs. o and the next chap in my story will be coming out in the next few days! lotsa stuff happens in it and there's a little bit of fluff, so i hope you enjoy it! update soon!