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person lere
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The girl gave power to Inu? What exactly is the little one? I'm dying to know. And I'm dying to read about Kagome opening her heart to Inu agai! Ca! Can't wait to read the next chapter. But I'm still troubled about the mate thing between kikyou and Inu from the first part. If Inu youkai mate for life, how Inu will be with kagome since Kikyou is around? Please, be fast and update soon!!!!

Big hugs from Brazil!

Lere
person nia-chan
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow the last chapter (11) was kind od intense... I tell you i so feel inu, and kag's pain but my god, a misunderstanding and communication has led to so many lost and sad years... And little kitsumi i swear i just want to hug and squeeze her to death......
anyways, well see see the aura on inu's fabbled sword wanicenice little suprise plotst..st.... Nice job.

I am so wanting to know what is up with that now lol ... and the fight was good in this chapter as well. Keep up the good work.

Nia-chan~~
person p423
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awsome story keep it going
person GgBg
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How could you put poor Inu through that? How many more times will he have to prove himself to get the respect that he deserves? He seemed more relieved after Tetsusaiga transformed for him, but I was wondering why he wouldn't have kept practicing with it? I mean Naraku hadn't been destroyed yet and he had lost the ability to have the sword transform as soon as it is pulled from the scabbard? That's not like Inuyasha; Sesshoumaru or Naraku could have shown up at any time during those five years and he would have been out of sync and ended up dead within the first couplesecoseconds when pitted against either one of them. After all, we women know, a man is nothing without his fully transformed "sword" (ha, ha)! On another note: I am so glad that you kept the inept idiot (Tai) asleep in his tent, leave his sorry butt their for as long as possible! Loved the chapter as always and I can't wait for the next installment.
person Mischief
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! I really love this story. Please update soon.
person Ronna
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted you to know that I love your stories! I have read A Lifetime Loving You twice now. I wanted to thank you for the time you spend on these. I look forward to a new chapter! Thank you again! Ronna
person Lynn
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love it! I want more! So mean of you to put in there that you wont update unless you get 10 reviews! Well, I hope you get them soon, because I don't want to wait to long!
person GgBg
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was never so happy to get your email regarding the new chapter for this storWhenWhen I saw this chapter I was like an addict getting their next fix, I did four things to this chapter before I settled on readit ant and body was it good. I drank, smoked, injected, and inhaled it to get enough of it into my system to hold me until your next installment. By the way this was a fantastic chapter, let me know when you post the next one. Thank you!
person Anandria
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You update when you don't get any more reviews? So, in theory, if a lot of people don't review than you'll update sooner? Quick! Everyone! Don't review so we can get a new chapter! Maybe I shouldn't say that, people might actually take me seriously...Lord knows that some of them are stupid enough to...coolness though! It's sad that he died, but I think it's kinda cool that Inu mourned his death. I don't know where I got the idea that he wouldn't, but it still shows that he isn't heartless(not that I ever had a doubt...) I'm using elipses a lot, aren't I? Ah well! Speaking of punctuation and things related, I caught some stuff! For instance, you've used the wrong form of words like "to" "two" and "too" and the different "your" and "you're" stuff like that. but I can't condemn ya, that stuff's easy enough to overlook! Continue, onegai!

Ja ne, Ruby-san!
person Anon
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well I went thru and read all the chapters for part two again just to refresh myself up to date and make sure nothing had changed in the earlier chapters since it was on ff.net. and once again your writting skills arezingzing....

nia-chan~~~