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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOWWWWW!!!! A wonderful chapter! Poor Inu-chaagomagome must be blind! Well I can't blame her since she was going thru a lot, but I think she will allow him inside her walls. Love will find a way, right? And I hope it will be soon, right? RIGHT???????
Please, make me happy again updating soon, ok?
Big hugs from Brazil!
Lere
Please, make me happy again updating soon, ok?
Big hugs from Brazil!
Lere
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May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well here's one more review! im dying to know what happened to tetsusaiga!!! btw, i saw you having more typos and stuff. . .if you need an editor let me know!
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just love this story!!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
At first I thought that it was Inu-Taisho, but then Kitsume said what she did. Although, i might not be entirely wrong. I know that it has something to do with the star charm. Ha, clever with the moon. I wonder when Jinenji's is...(the hanyou they met when they needed to get herbs for Kirara) Fluff, can't wait! Continue, onegai!
Ja ne, Ruby-san!
Ja ne, Ruby-san!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story, and I can't wait to see how you bring Kagome & Inuyasha together. I hope it's soon & that they end up happy.
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my review for chapter 10:
I haven't been here to this website for a while due to none of my favorite author's updating their fics, so imagine to my surprise to find I had two new chapters from you to read. I would have paid good money to see Inuyasha carry Kitsumi in his mouth, too funny! I felt so sorry for Polaris for loosing her son like that and for Inuyasha to cry is unheard of. Kagome can so destroy a moment, can't she...she had to bring Sesshoumaru into their talk regarding Kitsumi. So a new set of clothes for our hero, I hope it protects against poison say like...Sesshoumaru's brand! Inuyasha gonna whip some butt, you go boy.
Fred
I haven't been here to this website for a while due to none of my favorite author's updating their fics, so imagine to my surprise to find I had two new chapters from you to read. I would have paid good money to see Inuyasha carry Kitsumi in his mouth, too funny! I felt so sorry for Polaris for loosing her son like that and for Inuyasha to cry is unheard of. Kagome can so destroy a moment, can't she...she had to bring Sesshoumaru into their talk regarding Kitsumi. So a new set of clothes for our hero, I hope it protects against poison say like...Sesshoumaru's brand! Inuyasha gonna whip some butt, you go boy.
Fred
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my review for chapter 11:
Hey don't do that ever again, you had me scared for Inuyasha (just kidding). I think that the moral of this story is never get too Complacent in your ability or stop practicing, you might just get it in the end...and the front too. :-o Wow Kagome didn't believe in him for that short span of time, that must really sting, she shoulde moe more faith in Inuyasha...you never let the hero die (unless your ending the story or your trying to pair her off with someone else - and I'm sorry to all of you other author's out there but that just doesn't work and I don't read fics like those). So good save and I can't wait for the lime content of the next chapter! can you please, please, please make it lemony-lime or lime-lemony, let Inuyasha get some kind of action, I mean it's been five almost six years and that's not normal for a healthy male.;-) Until next update...Hurry!!
Fred
Hey don't do that ever again, you had me scared for Inuyasha (just kidding). I think that the moral of this story is never get too Complacent in your ability or stop practicing, you might just get it in the end...and the front too. :-o Wow Kagome didn't believe in him for that short span of time, that must really sting, she shoulde moe more faith in Inuyasha...you never let the hero die (unless your ending the story or your trying to pair her off with someone else - and I'm sorry to all of you other author's out there but that just doesn't work and I don't read fics like those). So good save and I can't wait for the lime content of the next chapter! can you please, please, please make it lemony-lime or lime-lemony, let Inuyasha get some kind of action, I mean it's been five almost six years and that's not normal for a healthy male.;-) Until next update...Hurry!!
Fred
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, good stuff ,update quick k
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My friend gave me the 2 new chapters of your fanfic and I thought that they were awesome! Inu and Kag have had to deal with so much crap in their young lives, it would be hard for me to even imagine a life somewhat like that, but real people go through something that almost parallels their life (without the demons) daily. You do such a good job of writing, I hope that's what your undertaking in school, you would be a fantastic writer!! Keep up the good work and update soon! I can't wait for the upcoming lime chapter, it's about time for some hentainess (new word, do you like?)!
Weesie
Weesie
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the email letting me know once again. As I predicted, InuYasha won.
A shame it was so short but I understand. A few spelling errors but I will overlook them.
Seu neu next chapter.
youkai tsuki
A shame it was so short but I understand. A few spelling errors but I will overlook them.
Seu neu next chapter.
youkai tsuki