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November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!! Please continue to write and not discontinue this fic! I love how Inuyasha was finally being more open with Kagome, but it didn't seem out of place, not forced, just completly natural. It's hard to believe you had writer's block. :) Do you have a mailing list for then you update your stories? If so, could you please put my email on it? Thank you!
~ A devoted fan
~ A devoted fan
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cry* I seriously have tears in my eyes after reading this! PLS update again soon
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg omg this is outstanding well done please update soon
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! I can't believe!!! Finally!!!!! I was wondering if you had forgot this wonderful story. And this chapater was amazing!!! Inu and Kag forver!!! But I really want to see those two talking about Kikyou beeing his mate when she was alive. That will be the day when I'll see the sun shine! Because I think that knowledge is what is making Kagome so afraid of her ownlinglings for Inuyasha. Please, don't torture us much more... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! FOR GOD'S SAKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey SDR,
I was a able to get on a computer real fast at work and thought I would leave youuickuick review but now that I have read Bill the Surly review I must make a comment about it.
First SDR Please delete it. It isn't a Constructive review it was a flame and a stupid one at that. They lectured you about grammar and spelling. Well Bill in your review you wrote "Sweet and all but no completely unbelivable" it should be "Sweet and all but not completely belivable", please when flaming someone about grammar and context be sure that you don't make any mistakes either it makes you look like a complete fool.
Also this story doesn't have any rape in it that was the first. She also has put up quite a few warrings regarding the scenes.
Finally in closing this is a website devoted to extreme themes and if you find that mature themes are not for your liking why are you visiting a website like this in the first place.
P.S.
Bill the Surly I would love to know how much expertise and knowledge of the Inuyasha characters you have. The author has put the characters into different situations and you really don't know how they would react. Making them not Out Of Character. Also just to let you know different people handle crisis very differently i.e. Rape, domestic violence, drug addiction, and so forth.
P.S.S
Don't let this bring you down SDR. I just wanted to let you know I have your back.
Your Friend,
Ick.
I was a able to get on a computer real fast at work and thought I would leave youuickuick review but now that I have read Bill the Surly review I must make a comment about it.
First SDR Please delete it. It isn't a Constructive review it was a flame and a stupid one at that. They lectured you about grammar and spelling. Well Bill in your review you wrote "Sweet and all but no completely unbelivable" it should be "Sweet and all but not completely belivable", please when flaming someone about grammar and context be sure that you don't make any mistakes either it makes you look like a complete fool.
Also this story doesn't have any rape in it that was the first. She also has put up quite a few warrings regarding the scenes.
Finally in closing this is a website devoted to extreme themes and if you find that mature themes are not for your liking why are you visiting a website like this in the first place.
P.S.
Bill the Surly I would love to know how much expertise and knowledge of the Inuyasha characters you have. The author has put the characters into different situations and you really don't know how they would react. Making them not Out Of Character. Also just to let you know different people handle crisis very differently i.e. Rape, domestic violence, drug addiction, and so forth.
P.S.S
Don't let this bring you down SDR. I just wanted to let you know I have your back.
Your Friend,
Ick.
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was really good, your putting in kikyo though I did not like (of caorse I don't like her at all) but it did make the ending good.
grrrr Inu should of kissed her but it's your story so do what you think is better.
ok what I want to no is what did Kitsumi dream about? ok good work
kittery
grrrr Inu should of kissed her but it's your story so do what you think is better.
ok what I want to no is what did Kitsumi dream about? ok good work
kittery
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eh. Everyone is extremely ooc in both stories. You should pick a POV and stick with it.. mutli first person POVs are very poor mechanics. Honestly, I find it difficult to believe that Sesshoumaru, a demon who's will alone can crush an evil swords power can be mired by a spell. Inuyasha can help Kitsumi control her youkai blood when he can't control his own? Sweet and all.. but no completely unbelivable. I won't even go on how utterly offend I am that you trivialized something as brutal as rape. Sickening truly and very insensitive. If you don't know how to deal with a rape situation don't write about one. Period. As it is, Kagome mor more like she was pushed down a flight of stairs rather than suffered a life altering tragedy.
Kitsumi herself is what 5? Then she should act as such. Her dialouge and comprehension put her at, at the bare minium 13.
Kagura able to injure Sesshoumaru? Right. Sorry that's not happening.
Since you are known for deleting reviews that don't praise your dubious talents I won't go into the other things that I found unrealistic and or bothersome. Just know they are ent.ent. And a word to the wise, when praising one's self you should always properly spell.
Kitsumi herself is what 5? Then she should act as such. Her dialouge and comprehension put her at, at the bare minium 13.
Kagura able to injure Sesshoumaru? Right. Sorry that's not happening.
Since you are known for deleting reviews that don't praise your dubious talents I won't go into the other things that I found unrealistic and or bothersome. Just know they are ent.ent. And a word to the wise, when praising one's self you should always properly spell.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!! Sesshy's going soft!!! *envisions fluffy lil sessho babies* KAWAII!! awesome writing, as always. :)
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I am glad you are back to writing and updating again. I had
to read chpter 12 again to bring myself up to date. Sess in a challenging
character to write but you still managed to capture his personality. Keep it up..
And I will see you in the reviews.
Tsuki
to read chpter 12 again to bring myself up to date. Sess in a challenging
character to write but you still managed to capture his personality. Keep it up..
And I will see you in the reviews.
Tsuki
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic please update soon