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person thoughts
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to your new chapters.

I have really enjoyed this story. I like your Inuyasha -- he is loyal and caring. He's not completely out of character since we have seen this side of him in the series.

I love Kitsumi. She's wonderful.

I must say that I feel like having a little chat with Kagome, but that is nothing new. I feel that way about her in the series too. :)

I'm enjoying the pace of your story. It is very easy to read (that is a compliment by the way). It alllows the reader to get captured more by the story than by the words.

Thanks for a very good read.
person lere
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EVIL AUTHOR!!!! WHAT A CLIFF!!!!!!! But finally a new chapter and a fantastic one too. I'm glad I could help you to put part 1 here because this is a wonderful story and I'll be always support you.
Oh... my job is safe, don't worry.

Big hugs from Brazil!!!!
person Tealya
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bites fingernails* You can't stop now! Sucks you had to take this off FF.net, but I'm glad you've been able to restore it here. Can't wait for the rest.
person Ronna
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad that you e-mailed me! I love this story and would hate not to be able to see it to the end. I first strated to read this, just as you starte wri write Part 2. I couldn't stop! I HAD to see what came next! I highly recommend this story. You make me see and feel along with the characters. You have made me cry and made me laugh and I love you for it. Thank you! Sincerely Yours, Ronna
person youkai tsuki
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i loved it as usual. I figured you would post as soon as I started cooking
dinner. (Or once everyone left you alone) Kitsumi is a typical child, she hates to get punished.
And cliffy's do suck. *pouts* But I am patient.
Ok now I have to get back to my speech and our conversation.

youkai tsuki
person GgBg4u
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! You have a way of telling a story that's really refreshing. I'm glad that I took the time to read the first part of your story and I am looking forward to the rest of part two, keep up the good work and I can't wait for you to update.
person lere
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! if you want to save the first part I've the 31 chapters because i made a copy!!! Don't worry, I'll not post that anywhere. I just made a copy to read the story again when i want. So if you want I can send your chapters to you.

Update soon and make your fans happy!!!

Hugs frm Brazil!!!
person youkai tsuki
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
While I am sorry FF.net deleted your story without giving you the option if removing it yourself
or at the very least editing, I am glad your here!! Ok now I will return to our conversation. hehe


youkai tsuki
person Hot Otaku
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've always thought your work was awesome, and still think so. Now we just need to get your illustrations up! Keep writing, its beautiful. (Can't wait to see how they deal with Ura!)
person Ickabod119
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am truly sorry about your fic getting kick off ff.net. as you can see we are growing here at Adult Fan Fiction we welcome you with open arms. Can't wait for more!!!