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person Fred
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, please give us the update, please, please!
person lere
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just love the way you are making them loose the hold in their feelings. It's so beautiful!!! And Inu personality is more mature too. I like that. What about the girl and Kikyou??? I want to know more about that.

Keep going soon!!!!

Biiiiiiiiig hugs from Brazil!!!!

Lere
person Ickabod119
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay SDR I don't know how much longer I can take this. I beggin you to post more soon!!!
person TLC
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man you got my hopes up that we might see a fsexual encounter with Inu/Kag but I didn't get POUT but that's okaytilltill love you so I am asking to post more of this story soon!!! I Justed the loved the part were Inuyasha thought father the whole time in his head.
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ued sed so quick I was just scanning through founfound a six chapter but now I asking to to post the seventh Immeidatly. Inuyasha is such a wonderful hero I really hope he becomes Kitzuni father and i can't wait for the Inu/Kag moment.
person Ickabod119
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You jerked my heart with this chapter SDR. I was not surprised by Sesshomaru reaction to his child I thought you had him IC the whole time during the conservation between Kitzumi & Him. WOW! what can you say about Kitzumi being rejected by society is one thing but being rejected by flesh & blood is another But I glad in a way because She had a fire deep down in her alot like Inuyasha does and maybe he will just bring it out in her. Once again you prove with your wonderful writing skills how much I want to just grad Kitzumi and give her a big bear hug and tell everything is going to be alright. Well I think I ramble on enough please post more of this soon!!!
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! This story was referred to me by Ickabod and let just gorgeous. I wondered what Sesshomaru reaction would be to Kitzumi and I wish he would have been a little more supportive of the situation but that would be a an out of character Sesshomaru. GO Inuyasha & Kagome. Please Update soon!!!
person TLC
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man Sesshomaru is such a bastard but maybe that is what people love about him personally if it was me I rather have a Hanyou with dirty blood over a cold demon lord because we all know who carries the bigger sword in the show. I hope Inuyasha & Kagome can realize feelings for each other soon! I hope you update soon!
person Supercool
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was hoping after Sesshomaru said all those things about Kitzumi that she would turn into the evil part of her a rip his balls off so he could not have pure blooded demon children down the road. GREAT STORY UPDATE SOON!!!
person lere
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOOhOOO!!!! And tha action begins!!!!! Wonderful chapter!!!! You know, now I see Inu's feelings for Kagome like I used to see her feelings for him before. It´s like when she was hiding her love, keeping it at bay afraid of rejection. But I really want to know about Kikyou and the mate issue. I think that was the final drop to Kagome when she refuses Inu.

OH, and I love the fluff thing, too!!!! I want to read more and see if your evil treat is really cool, he he...

Big hugs from Brazil, my friend!!!!
Lere