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person Sam
schedule December 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Really really wish the story would get finished!!!

person treefrog70
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So it's been forever since an update, have you abandoned the story??? It's too good to not have an ending posted.
person demonqueen
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Needed to tell you that I just love your stories. Have read Part 1 and have read all you have of Part 2. Hope you will update soon. It looks like Kagome is warming up to Inuyasha. She has tried to keep him and her feelings for him at arms length for quite some time. The only thing that would break the feelings she has toward Inuyasha would be for Kikyo to show up. I know Kagome is trying to keep herself from being hurt by Inuyasha trying to keep his promise to Kikyo, but he also made a promise to Kagome as well. It's going to be kind of hard for him to keep both promises. Will be waiting for you to continue Part 2. Thanks for sharing you writing with us.
person chanda
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well let me tell you that was worth the long wait... Absolutly fantastic, I was so drawn into the chapter, it was like I was there.

Look forward to your next update,
Chanda
person lere
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOHOOO!!! A new chapter!! I'm sorry about your mom, honey. I loved this new part. Absolutely beautiful the flying scene with Inu and Kitsumi. And I almost cried when Inu was dead. Poor Kagome!!!

I'll be waiting for the next one!!

Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere
person demonqueen
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thought I would let you know that I liked your part 1 and have enjoyed what you have written so far of part 2. Will you be updating more chapters soon. Will Kagome ever start to completely trust and let herself admit her love for Inuyasha. Yeah, I know he had made a promise to Kikyo, but so far she hasn't been in the picture and Inuyasha has stuck by Kagome's side through all of this and more. Will the travelers meet up with Sesshomaru and his small following? If so, I wonder what Sesshomaru and the Aunts and cousins that are traveling with Inuyasha will think of one another? Do the Aunts know about Sesshomaru? Or do they kind of ignore one another since he is a Lord and they are lower class. Anyway, good story so far. Please update more soon!
person Jimmy
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story and just update soon please.
person Heather
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this fic and would love to read more. Please update, for I have no imagenation of my own so live off of others'.
person Terrie
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I know its the summer and your having while you can before school start up again, but you said two weeks at the end of chapter 16 in part 2, I have literlly just spent the last three days reading your story as much as possable. I really feel that you are doing a wonderful job on this story and how you have it so planed out and how its so different from all the stories I have been reading FF.net. At first it took me about 3 chapters to get use to the style in how the stroy was written, and to be honest I'm quite impressed on how well you were able to turn it at the right point. Plus I like on how you put so much enlightment on how Inuyasha's life began, by the way was that all fact, or your opinon of what happened? If it was fact could you point me in the right direction, for I am trying to right my own stroy of what I know so far and what I would like see happen, but I need a little more in their history for many certin parts. If you could help that would be apprectiated. Also one more thing, Will Inu and Kag ever get through her barrier, and they become a family, and if so will it come in part 2 later on or will it be part 3, by which how long is that one going to be. Thank you for such an enjoyable story no matter how many disaprove of your views. My opinon to them is if they dont like, either get over it and keep reading, or dont bother finishing the story. I was enjoying your story so much I even barked at my roommates to shut up for they were distacting me with all the noise and pulling me out of the stroy mood it was in. Once again Thank you for such a wonderful story in my eyes and hope you can update soon with the facinating trials ahead. P.S Sorry for such a long reveiw, Terrie
person chanda
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed your stories. I hope you continue with this saga.
Please update soon.
Chanda