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for Two beautiful to be tied down

by Marisue

person Xenia
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*LOL* That's TOO funny... It's just like this time, right, when I like, fell down this well - and, like, I don't even LIVE in Japan, right? But this well was, like, TOTALLY connected to feudal Japan somehow and I, like, totally fell down it and ended up there!!! Although I didn't get it on with anybody. I just, like, found Kagome and asked her, like, what the hell she's doing NOT, like, having sex with Kouga every freaking second, like. Then I, like, decided to have sex with Kouga every freaking second, since she TOTALLY wasn't. I mean, someone should... right? I, I, like, TOTALLY lied when I said I didn't get it on with anybody, 'cos I, like, TOTALLY did Kouga. Many times. And, like, it was really good!!!!!!!!11one

*cough* Sorry... It's just too much fun to make fun of that kind of stuff :D Anyways, your story made me laugh... so good going! :D
person kenji
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked it. You should have done a lemon between inu and the new girl. I've read so many fics where kagome abandons inuyasha and runs off with someone else, it's nice to read one where the opposite happens