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for The Spring and Brothers

by YumeMaru

person unvoicedsigner
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey hey are you goin to write more plez write more i really want to read more
person Shadow Wolf
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O You have GOT to write more of this SOON!!! Please?!!
person Inu\'sLilKitten
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You have GOT to keep going. That is amazing..echlechless...
person Blue SaiyagelKgel
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This was........different? Unusual? Spicy? The only part I didn't think fit, no pun intended, was the last paragraph when Sess is contemplating keeping her by using spells to make her like him. Somehow, after all that has transpired, I don't think a spell will be needed. All in all I'd still give it a 10. It even had it's funny moments. I'll be looking for any other stories you write. TTFN
person wyrm of souls
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story! Nice and tart, lemony just like i like it :P so, do you plan to continue it? hope so, it seems like it could develop into a winning plot line, plus, well, sibling rivalry can be such a fun thing...plus miroku looked about ready to join the fun...tee hee, think she could handle three at once? or maybe sango wants to help...lol, ignore me, i'm being a bad girl...anywho, good story, i'll keep an eye out for any updates. later gater :)
person tag88
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope u plan on continuing b/c it was great!!
person =>
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon pweez doing good sess/kag forever and inu sometimes if hes lucky
person Yura
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow! This is interesting fic you have here! Please update soon! I can't wait for the next chapter...SESS AND KAGOME FOREVER!!!
person Helen
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was scrumptious. I would however list it as a thressome rather than F/M/M <---- gives the impression that there's male with male action. Anyway, you did an excellant first chapter, I can't wait for the next one though. Ja.
person yasmin
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo! this story is craxy , cant wait fnextnext chapter . i bet the brothers are gonna fight for her , and she'll have one on one with each of them