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I can't waite to read more.

I enjoyed it very much, for your first you did a wonderful job!
Review! plz

I love your story and i would love to read more. it usually takes alot to get me to like something, even more so a story, but you have mannaged to keep me interested and left me wanting more. i wish their were more authors like you out there. you said you would like some suggestions... well i'm not sure if i have much to offer but i can try. if you continue with this plot a) we all know Inuyasha won't go down without a fight, b) theres always Kouga to deal with. i personally love and thoroughly enjoy the Sessy+Kagome pairings, and i thank you for making a great one.

P.S. you may also want to consider, if you put Naraku in itat hat his reaction will be. should he A) be the sneaky underhanded him and try to get them to betray eachother B) try to take Kagome away from them (to make her his own....hmmm i don't think Sessy would like that)

i don't know if i helped any but i hope i did. i am begging you to continue. i will be checking regularly to see if you have updated. bye for now.

OMG! You have to finish this! This is really awesome!

Hello. Just want to tell you that we are waiting patiently for the next chapter...

poopy doopy! awwwwwwwwww come on, pwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, twas evil cliffy, there is more, howz aboutz if sessy beats inuyasha to a pulp and steals kagome away anrks rks her? changes her to a demon so she will bear his pups.

Damn this is fine good work for your first fic. pweaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee continue, pwease pwease pweeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

*looks at you with begging kitsune eyes* *they are cutier than a puppy's begging eyes* pwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee *whimpers*

*transforms into her true 9-tails with goingsings fox form and pounces you, sending you to the ground and looks at you with begging eyes*

This is one hoory.ory. You said you are looking for suggestions. OK. If Sessy takes Kagome then Inuyasha gets mad. I love Inuyasha, but he can be a jerk and he isn't fully demon so if Sessy dies he is heir. How about Kagome gets pregnant w/ Sessy a demon kills him. which leaves his brother to mate with Kagome and help raiis his heir b/c he would be a hanyou and not 3/4 human, but 1/2 and that way Sessy grows a heart and watches over them his 'family\ a s a spirt or ancestor. This is just suggestions, i have nothing concerning the Shikon no tama or Naraku, Kikyou might make a good 2nd prize to Inuyasha when Sessy takes Kagome though. Shippou should be adopted by Kagome though and raised along side Inuyasha/Kagome's kids and have one of the daughters fall in love w/ him and vise versa. If you didn't understand something email me or if you need any advise. OK UPDATE SOON I MIGHT BURST WITH CURIOUSITY IF I DON'T FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS SOON OR I MIGHT JUST MAKE UP AND ENDING IN MY HEAD.

THEY CAN SHARE KAGOME FOREVER THAT IS A LIFE I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE TWO REALLY HOT GUYS TAKING TURNS TO PLEASURE ME. HEAVEN!!!!!

wow steamy
for the rest of the plot dont drop of and make it mushy keep it romantic and steamy all the way through

great story please keep writing and up date soon thanks later