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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yo, c-dog...this is off tha chain!!
*switches off ghetto communicator*
seriously, this is good.
i'm with you...i don't like BS (lol...BS *snickerz* Miss Britney Spears) but i do loooooooooove toxic!!
=^-.~^=
*switches off ghetto communicator*
seriously, this is good.
i'm with you...i don't like BS (lol...BS *snickerz* Miss Britney Spears) but i do loooooooooove toxic!!
=^-.~^=
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think u did a great job for your first time. but it's leaving me wanting more. :) keep up the great job and update soon :).
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hate Brittney Spears, love the fic.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg I thought that was a very very good lemon..hehe...and the whole peeping tom thingy was cool and Kagome dancing in thongs and stuff totally good great one shot...huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not itneitney fan nor am I crazy over songfics, however the song works with the story. You pulled it off quite nicely ^_^. Side note: KagoKitty, no one uses 'off tha' chain' anymore. Haven't heard anyone say that in a loooonnnnggg time.
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn.......***love love love and ummmmmmmmmmmm.............................................MORE LOVE.***
lol in case you didn't get that i loved it.
~ Lady Dragon ~
lol in case you didn't get that i loved it.
~ Lady Dragon ~
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I....I think it was awesome!^^IT was completely sprite!^^Sprite a word my my friends and me use for lemony/limey fanfics cause you can see a lime and lemon on the bottles^_^Anyway CONTINUE pleeaassseeeee?*doggy pouts*oo;;;;;;;;;;How did you make me do that?oO
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the fic!!!Toxic is one of my favorite songs(only one i like by Brittany though,sry)and the story fits!!I just wish u had...ahem...gone farther!!!U should consider going all the way with it!!
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February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! That was good for a first lemon... Hehe. The first lem eve ever wrote I got screamed at it for it being bad. ~Big Aniearsears~ I was only 14 when I wrote it. ~.~V
Hey write one with "Milkshake" by urrrr... I forget. Ok. Still nice fic!!!
Hey write one with "Milkshake" by urrrr... I forget. Ok. Still nice fic!!!