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for Toxic

by cdog11587

person marissa
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yo plzzzzzzz write more that wa gettin soooooooo good n then it jus stopped. sooooooo plzzzzzzzzz write more!!!!! if u get a chance thankz oh n by the way i love ur other work!!!
person piccolojr182002
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it please keep going.
person Hells Angel
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was alwsome please write more keep the sexual senses ok!
person symphony
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
toxic is soo good will you please write more of it
person inuyashafanfaticlmv
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it loved it loved plz update soon
person huntress
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it's really good so far. I hope that you do a second chapter about Kagome getting hers and then some. It would fit really nice with how eberything started. Freat job, update soon if you were planning on to. =^.^=
person Kayce ( KC )
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey wassup!

Hey my name is KC too but mine is different though. I LOVE YOUR STORY! It so diffrerent from lemolemons I've seen. BUT I'm no pervert!! Keep going and writing it. I know its going tobe good. E-mail me when u do, if u want u know, but I'll check everyday though. OK great!! C ya. n_n
person MelMuff
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good! More! MORE!
person Magical Girl!
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was well...hot! It's good to see Kagome not act so innocent once in awhile. *smiles in the hopes of another chapter*?
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Believe me, I'm all too familiar with writing an Inu Yasha fic about a Britney Spears song. It was cool to see another one.^_^