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for Giving Up

by X1999kamuisgirl

person Shinna
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder how they will react to knowing that it was Sesshoumaru who revived them. What will they say when the find out that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are lovers. Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Shinna
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Nina
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you. What a wonderful hot, sexy, romantic lemon. And inuyasha does have a nice ass. Very well written. I'm so glad your feeling better too. Will there be other chapters? I hope so. Thanks for the email.
person snowfall
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaah, Kamui. Wonderful. Never thought I'd like this sort of thing, but you make it sound so good.
person Shinna
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. update soon
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for chappy 7! Going pretty well, although they just 'suddenly' decided they loved eotheother and desperately needed to have sex. It's not that realistic...but you're good with the almost lemon part so I'll let you go. xD
person Nina
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's not funny!!! You keep stopping at the best parts. I know you want to keep readers wanting for more, but this is just breaking up the flow of moment. I think I'll wait until you have a few more chapters up so I can read this scene in it's entirety. Chow for now.
person Shinna
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Nina
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left us hanging. That was just mean. That is just so hot. You better update this real soon. I mean it.
person Chaos
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yami Chaos:YOU EVIL WITCH!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU JUST CUT IT OFF LIKE THAT!!!!*pulls out butcher knife*WHY I OUTTA-
Hikari Chaos:*bonks yami on the head*Yami shut it!*bows*Gomen, don't mind her, keep up the good work, and update soon^_^
Yami Chaos:*rubs head* YOU HAD BETTER FINISH WAHT YOU STD!?!D!?! I WANT ACTION DAMNIT!!!!!!!*waves butcher knife threateningly*
Hikari Chaos: -_-'