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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Why!? Don't delete it please! Onegai!!!
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June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me...I think there's something wrong with your first chapter. It's a run-on paragraph with seemingly nothing to do with the story. The second chapter looks like the actual story, but I can't tell if there's something missing before that, or if it's the actual start of the fic. What's the deal? If the first chapter is some kind of joke, then it isn't really funny. Is it possible you've been hacked by someone, and had the first chapter replaced with that piece of nonsensical crap? If so, then I look forward to when it gets fixed. I'm off to read the rest of the fic now, assuming there are no more spam chapters lurking within.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn.... Awesome story dude.
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! This "scenes"... They are so freaking erotic and detailed man!!
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February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!
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August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh dont give up your story it is good plz cont.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... This story sounds more than a little like another one on here called "Naraku's need".
I'm going to risk making accusations and say that, either you are the same author under two different names, or someone's been plagerized (whether it be you or the other author, I have no idea.)
This is slightly worrying and I hope that the problem is resolved or explained soon enough because I don't much care of plagerizers.
I'm going to risk making accusations and say that, either you are the same author under two different names, or someone's been plagerized (whether it be you or the other author, I have no idea.)
This is slightly worrying and I hope that the problem is resolved or explained soon enough because I don't much care of plagerizers.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
don't stop wreighting it. it was soo good
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December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grrrr--well you may not be happy--but I was enjoying it---this is why I don't read serise----
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont think you need to delet your storys just write more and then when you find one that satifies you, work on it to your fullest extent.
personaly i like this story "Giving up" or so it is labled. i like it and would like to read more, im a very picky read, and i cant write worth shit, tho i do try from time and again. however dont give up. that is mainly what i have to say. ppl like me enjoy the finer things that only our twisted minds can come up with, and beleave me i am twisted. i hope you find a settling that suits you. and thank you for keeping you story up long enuff for me to find it.
i prefer inu/sessy i think they work well together, and i also like to mix in a few other. tho i have yet to find a DB/Z/GT fic where piccolo is not with gohan and Vegeta is with Teen Dende, but ohwell.. time will pass and things will change.
but enjoy writing and enjoy you imaganation..and please forgive the lack of grand spelling..<.<;
Xhanx,
Storm
personaly i like this story "Giving up" or so it is labled. i like it and would like to read more, im a very picky read, and i cant write worth shit, tho i do try from time and again. however dont give up. that is mainly what i have to say. ppl like me enjoy the finer things that only our twisted minds can come up with, and beleave me i am twisted. i hope you find a settling that suits you. and thank you for keeping you story up long enuff for me to find it.
i prefer inu/sessy i think they work well together, and i also like to mix in a few other. tho i have yet to find a DB/Z/GT fic where piccolo is not with gohan and Vegeta is with Teen Dende, but ohwell.. time will pass and things will change.
but enjoy writing and enjoy you imaganation..and please forgive the lack of grand spelling..<.<;
Xhanx,
Storm