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for Fateful Night

by LadyOrion

person kettricken
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I saw your "lack of review" comment and thought I'd drop a line =) I've been reading your story since you started it, and I have to say it's one of the more interesting ideas I've read. Will things be different because Kagome is older, maybe because she was in love with Hojo (weirdness!)?? Does the well still work? I hope you continue--I really want to know how this works out!!
person myrrdinowl
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think this story is pretty good. i like it and hope that you update soon.
person RekkaShinen
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like where you're going with this story. I'd very much like to see how you would continue it. The only problems I saw were some misspelled words, but we've all been guilty of that. ^.~ v
person Ickabod119
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter hopefully you will make it through the rest of feburary so you can post more of this excellent story and can't wait to see more!!!
person Kari
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad u updated, sorry things have been sucky i can relate :). but i was so excited to see that u have updated. but your doing a wonderful job and i can't wait to read more into the story :). i hope shippo comes into the story soon i love him so much *hehe*
person Diane
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it's pretty good plotwise, chapter 4 was hard to read because of some funky coding. Just as a point of interest Kohaku's weapon is a chain scythe. You might want to get a beta to go over the chapters, it's usually easier to see errors of all kinds if you didn't actually write the piece.
person Mija
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
first let me say I am sorrry to hear about your accident I am glad that you are alright though, I have been in near accidents and they left me soo rattled I was affraid to get into cars for awhile, so I know how it might feel, Im glad your ok though really I am...as for the chapter it was awsome and I totally loved it, I love the way Inu is over protective with her, as fate would have it, they were meant to be united in one way or the other, very goant ant wait to read more and hope u update soon but not till you feel completly better..till then you take care be well safe and good huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Ickabod119
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For this being your first fanfiction I must say you are doing a wonderful job, Can't wait for more chapters from you!!!
person Lady Sethia
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was really good!! Please update soon, I can hardly wait to see your next chapter.

Lady Sethia
person amyfushigiyugi
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please please i want more as soon as u can write it and why have u not been writeing befor this u are awsome
i love this fic A++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++