Reviews for Fateful Night - Inuyasha

person SilverFox

schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

O.o An evil Hojo? And not a dense as lead and brainless one? I don't know wheather to shake your hand or hug you! ( I think though I will just shake your hand ^_~ ) I have been waiting for someone to do an evil Hojo...make him return! Make him return! I love the idea! Heh heh...Its better than the same old same old Interfering Kikyo bit over and over again making me dizzy with its repetitivness...@_@ Heh heh....I vote for the Evil Interfering Hojo! I want that man to have some fucking brains for once. Though a dense as lead Hojo is hysterical, but a change of pace will be nice.

I can't wait for the next chapter, this is going to be one great fan fic! Until next time! ^_^

person SilverFox

schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM

^_^ Great chapter! Tell your muse thanks for at least letting you write it before dragging you, uh elsewhere for other things! ^_~ Hee hee ^_^ But seriously great chapter. I didn't think the fight scene with Mistress Centipede was exceedingly long it fact it was just the right length in my opinion. And I have a good idea on who the voice is but I'm not going to say. Heh heh...Someone might read the reviews first! :-D Now only if my own muse was half as nice as yours...I think mines on strike! ( the littl bastard! )Anyhoo, until next time! ^_^

person drake220

schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM

hey, i say listen to the muse man. he's sexy enough, he deserves it. damn, why can't mye loe look like that?!?!? mine's invisible! you know, i just cant catch a break! give a lime or something. not even between inu/kag. do someone else. anyways, great chapter, really enjoyed it.

person SilverFox

schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM

^_^ I am so happy that you have finally been able to update! I was begining to wonder! I love the new chapters! They are great!

* does a happy dance trips and falls * O.o! Anyhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter....* hops from one foot to the other in excitement * Until next time! ^_^

person Precious

schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM

So far I just love your story. The details are beautiful. The storyline is great. I kind of like some of the twists you added to make up for this being altered from it’s original storyboard. It’s still a bit strange havinuYasuYasha and Sesshomaru so close together and not trying to kill each other. And Jaken is living in a human village! The thought made me pause in reading! I do like how you acknowledge the fact that Kagome would have ended up with Hojo had she never met InuYasha. (I think some people tend to forget that…) I’m happy you kept InuYasha and Koga’s relationship the same. What is an InuYasha story without the dog vs. wolf battle! I loved how you tweaked the InuYasha/Kikyo betrayal. It was the same but different and it all made sense. I hope InuYasha has the brains to jump in after her. (Though I did crack up at his “helpess”ess”) And I’m going to keep the rest to myself, since I see you have banned someone from guessing. And I too am dyslexic. I know how hard it can be. And to boot you are in a foreign country. Hope that teaching job is going well. I have taken the time to beta chapters 1-9 since I know you don’t have the time. If things are still wrong I tried. Email me if you want the revised copy. Can’t wait for your next chapter!

person amyfushigiyugi