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July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As you can probably tell, I am bored right this minute. But, this fic caught my eye. I started to read it and couldn't stop. I really wish you would finish it. I hate it when there is a spectacular fic like this that is just left, forgotten and unfinished.
Please update if you remember this.
Please update if you remember this.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I really do, but I hate cliffys. I really do. So maybe you can update soon. Maybe. I'm anxious.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! awesome! so glad your back and what an awesome chapter! i can't wait till u update again and i hope it's sooon please *hehe* take care!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I love this version of Inuyasha! This is great! I hope you do update soon!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! absolutely a faboulous story!
I hope Kagome will stop having those horrible nightmares so that she can enjoy her relationship w/ Inuyasha (I'm an Inu/kag fan all the way!)
Just one thing: before posting, try to correct some little grammar mistakes.
Also, Miroku is a Houshi (which means monk) and not Hoishi or whatever you wrote (I don't remember ^^; )
One of the last chapters (I think 14 or 15 or 16) has some weird signs on it that make difficult the reading...
But otherwise these little things, I completely adore your story!
Please keep writing!
I hope Kagome will stop having those horrible nightmares so that she can enjoy her relationship w/ Inuyasha (I'm an Inu/kag fan all the way!)
Just one thing: before posting, try to correct some little grammar mistakes.
Also, Miroku is a Houshi (which means monk) and not Hoishi or whatever you wrote (I don't remember ^^; )
One of the last chapters (I think 14 or 15 or 16) has some weird signs on it that make difficult the reading...
But otherwise these little things, I completely adore your story!
Please keep writing!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm in love hehe, this story is wonderful i'm loving how everything is comming along. i can't wait to read what u have comming next in the story. i love how InuYasha reaction to Kagome is, it's cute and funny. hope u update soon
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi cooly fanfic so fars! ^_^ hurry up and finish it!!!!! plz!!!!!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
were the hell is inuyasha BICH WERE IS HE
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Silly goose! You insult your writing too much! I was extremely excited to see that you had updated. You've started a very compelling story and I'm enjoying how it slowly unfolds. I know how annoying it is to face writer's block, since I'm in that stage myself...well, that and a lack of real time for writing! But take your time...write in bits and spurts when the mood strikes. Your fans will wait for updates...I know, I for one will.
:)
As for your story...poor Inuyasha got pounded into the ground by Kagome's sits! Hanyou abuse! Hanyou abuse! Can I report Kagome? :)
I think that you're doing a great job depicting poor Kagome's tortured feelings. It's so obvious that she's connected to Inuyasha...that she's growing closer to him - emotionally and physically. At the same time, it would be out of character, given her warm and sincere heart to quickly forget about Hojo. It's terrible enough to lose the man you think you'll marry (even if he's *not* the right one for you), but even worse to have him reanimated and turned into a vengeful zombie who wants to destroy you...who blames you for his death.
All in all, Kagome seems to be adjusting to her new time and surroundings well enough.
I'm *so* evil...but I like that Kagome is still somewhat afraid of Kouga. He can't really be Inu's rival for her affection that way. And I love how Inuyasha is being forced to "grow" to move out of his own emotional shell in order to reach and comfort Kagome. Your description of his action alone speaks volumes for the way he's coming to care for her so deeply.
Looking forward to more...
:)
As for your story...poor Inuyasha got pounded into the ground by Kagome's sits! Hanyou abuse! Hanyou abuse! Can I report Kagome? :)
I think that you're doing a great job depicting poor Kagome's tortured feelings. It's so obvious that she's connected to Inuyasha...that she's growing closer to him - emotionally and physically. At the same time, it would be out of character, given her warm and sincere heart to quickly forget about Hojo. It's terrible enough to lose the man you think you'll marry (even if he's *not* the right one for you), but even worse to have him reanimated and turned into a vengeful zombie who wants to destroy you...who blames you for his death.
All in all, Kagome seems to be adjusting to her new time and surroundings well enough.
I'm *so* evil...but I like that Kagome is still somewhat afraid of Kouga. He can't really be Inu's rival for her affection that way. And I love how Inuyasha is being forced to "grow" to move out of his own emotional shell in order to reach and comfort Kagome. Your description of his action alone speaks volumes for the way he's coming to care for her so deeply.
Looking forward to more...
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January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...I forgot to mention...my name was "szmadad" ...just so you know, I've been reading and reviewing this story for a while now! :)