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for Revived Child, A Womans Love

by Ppalae1

person animegirl007
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story....don't know why I missed it....I hope you will update soon.....
person April
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its pretty good, can't wait till you update!
person animegirl
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story.....update please...update
person ........
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please update, i really wanna read ur ch. 2
person YoukaiMistress
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UP AND WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! LOL
person marnika
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed reading the first chapter of your story.
But Sesshomaru loving a little Inuyasha makes it seem like an AU story.
person Desmond
schedule June 16, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
My name is Desmond. But my friends call me X. ^_^ I liked ur fic, I used 2 Beyblade when I was 13, i'm 15 now, & i'm thinkin bout gettin back into blading. Cuz I wanna blade as good as Kai. But anyways this fic is cool. I'd never thought Kai + Mariam going with each other, u did a good job with the lemon part. And Ray + Mariah, it's kinda obv, bu, but very well done. But I really never tho of of Tyson + Hilary gn win with each other in bed. That was the most surprise, cuz me & my friend Chelsea, always talked bout the Beybladin couples, usually we would role play & figure out who we would go out with, she usually used Max, I alwayz had Salima. But u gotta get Maxie a girlfriend, as much as i'm a little jealous of his puppy eyes look, u should get him a cute gf. Maybe like Salima or someone. Well I hope the best of ya rest of the fic, can ya e-mail when it'satedated, I would appreciate that.

To a new fan,
Desmond Thompson/X