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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
owee you just had to go and mess up the perfect ending with inuyasha hating the relationship of his daughter and her mate
ehhhhh well its cool ill get over it. lol
thanks for the update
ehhhhh well its cool ill get over it. lol
thanks for the update
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
what an amazing story and you got 20368 hits to prove that its good
41 chapters and im still hungry for more.
you are a really great writer thanks for the great read
i seriously cant wait till the next update
what an amazing story and you got 20368 hits to prove that its good
41 chapters and im still hungry for more.
you are a really great writer thanks for the great read
i seriously cant wait till the next update
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!! Seriously, this is my favorite fic, I really hope you update soon, it's too good of a story to not be continued!!!!!!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope InuYasha, Sesshomaru and Kouga find and kill Naraku! Hopefully Kagura will help as well.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord!!! this is the dirtiest little trifle I have ever read... and I loved it!!!
DAMN!!! It also happens to be the first Inuyashu fanfic I have ever read, as I am a dyed in the wool Rurouni Kenshin fan. Inuyashu doesn't come on toonami where I live until like 4 a.m. and I am just way toooo old to stay up that late, so I have never actually seen it, but my teenage boys got telling me about it... and there are so many fanfictions about it here on AFF.net and on FF.net *I have fanfics in both places*, so I finally had to check it out for myself. I have spent a couple of days researching character profiles so I would know wh was was reading about... and your's was the first story I picked to read... and WOW! What a story. You have quite the 'thing' for oral... ... I am not complaining... just nasty, nasty, nasty... You have a good talent for character and scene plotting that should only get better with practice. I did notice that you tend to rush a little bit through the 'bones and framework' around the story to get to the 'good spots', but not enough to make a really big difference. I think with time, you will very easily learn to 'flesh' out your story-telling which will only make what you are doing get better.
BRAVO! I say... BRAVO! Now update this yummy thing... I am hooked for sure.
Kanzen ne Tsuki
DAMN!!! It also happens to be the first Inuyashu fanfic I have ever read, as I am a dyed in the wool Rurouni Kenshin fan. Inuyashu doesn't come on toonami where I live until like 4 a.m. and I am just way toooo old to stay up that late, so I have never actually seen it, but my teenage boys got telling me about it... and there are so many fanfictions about it here on AFF.net and on FF.net *I have fanfics in both places*, so I finally had to check it out for myself. I have spent a couple of days researching character profiles so I would know wh was was reading about... and your's was the first story I picked to read... and WOW! What a story. You have quite the 'thing' for oral... ... I am not complaining... just nasty, nasty, nasty... You have a good talent for character and scene plotting that should only get better with practice. I did notice that you tend to rush a little bit through the 'bones and framework' around the story to get to the 'good spots', but not enough to make a really big difference. I think with time, you will very easily learn to 'flesh' out your story-telling which will only make what you are doing get better.
BRAVO! I say... BRAVO! Now update this yummy thing... I am hooked for sure.
Kanzen ne Tsuki
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was really good. I bow down to your great writing. Well there's one thing that bothers me. It's the fact that you killed Inutaisho. WHY?! WHY?! and I say it again WHY?! I understand that he had to die well because he wasn't in the show but why? Other than that great story.
your friend
Sesshylover1
you know who i am =)
Don't forget to update please I want to see what naraku does next.
your friend
Sesshylover1
you know who i am =)
Don't forget to update please I want to see what naraku does next.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! It's so intriguing, so much so that I can't get enough of it. It would be sweet if Sesshomaru and InuYasha both had big families.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Semper Fidelis
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would've thought that both couples were going to have more children. But I guess I was wrong.
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn good absolute perfection this story is awesome keep up the good work and please update soon