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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great stroy really but I sorta just have to point out that in the text of chapter 13 Rin is refered to a a maiden. Did youknow that maiden refers to a female virgin, so rin could not at that stage be a maiden as she is with pup let alone just a virgin.
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November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i thought that your story was incredible all that detail i mean i'm an inuyasha an dinutaisho fan but i could never come up with something like that you are truly amazing WOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THat was a 200 out of 10 wew
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI OMG!!! that was incredible i read that whole story and i loved it how do u get all you're topics and can you give me some pointers i want to write a story my self. o and you should be very proud you are an awesome author plz e-mail me back or if u have msn add me! (wow) .....but i didnt like you're ending that much it sounded like you just wanted to end it but it was still very excellent !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( i love inuyasha)
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April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so beatiful!!!! :::cries:::
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOUR STORY IT WAS THE BEST KEPT GOING YOUR MAKE ANOTHER ONE THAT WAS GREATY!
THE BEST ONE I EVER READ! IN THIS WHOLE SITE
kEPT IT GOING IT WAS SO GOOD!
MAKE SESSS RAPE KAGOMES KID AND THEN INU AND SESSS FGITH AGAIN NOOOOO
AMIAYA HUSABND DECLARES WAR ON SESSSS
YEAH
THE BEST ONE I EVER READ! IN THIS WHOLE SITE
kEPT IT GOING IT WAS SO GOOD!
MAKE SESSS RAPE KAGOMES KID AND THEN INU AND SESSS FGITH AGAIN NOOOOO
AMIAYA HUSABND DECLARES WAR ON SESSSS
YEAH
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought this story was awesome and very well written. I was wondering if you were thinking about writing a sequel to it.
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Well, I have to tell that I really liked your story. I'm Spanish, and this has been the first story with 40 chapters that I read, as you can imagine. Congratulations for it, and continue writing.
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whew* OKIES THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE REVIEWED THIS STORY....EVEN THO I HAVE READ THE FIRST 29 CHAPTERS... OKIES....THIS STORY IS ...INTERESTING...VERY...THE the only problem is that your chapters ARE TOO FREAKIN SHORT (shame on) yo) you should also be a little more discriptive...other than that i am very pleezed and i do like it alot !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.......n_n....okies now im gonna go finish the rest of the chappies and then ill review it once more ^^
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulation! You did it! I hope to read more stories from you!
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
owe how sad your all done with this story
damn i hoped it would be longeehh ehh oh well
i still love it none the less
i truely thank you for your wonderful fanfic
you did an amazing job
damn i hoped it would be longeehh ehh oh well
i still love it none the less
i truely thank you for your wonderful fanfic
you did an amazing job