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a good start yes now you must finish it please and soon i'll be waiting for an update

I like this story. Please continue it.

I do enjoy your story-this is not a flame-but I find a few things odd. First: Kagome is a Miko and was raised by as such, hence her miko garbs correct? Well why didn't she use her powers to get Inuyasha away from her? Could it be that she loved him from teh begining and couldn't bare to hurt him even though he could obvivously bare to rape her 4 times (2 vaginally, 1-anal- 1-oral) Second: If InuTaisha chose her because of her likeness to Inuyasha's mother, did he truly intend on Kagome's being a mere whore, a raphorehore at that? Perhaps he intende one one of his sons claiming her as a lifemate, since INuyasha brings up the possiblity of her going to Sesshomaru as well. I mean obvivously he knew she was a miko and a virgin and InuTaisha has already shown his concern for humans-Inuyasha's mother-so I was curious if he would be very upset with Inuyasha's defiling of the unwilling girl-I keep thinking of Inutasha asking Inuyasha he enjoyed her moans and the screaming of his name as he pleasured Kagome after INuyasha tells him he wants to keep her for himself and then the horror to find out that she was raped each time they were together. InuT tells InuY that she was a miko and all about his true intentions and punishes InuY by taking Kagome from him and treating her as one of his own children perhaps-perhaps not. Oh and what of the Shikon? That should b an interesting discovery by InuY and family. WEll these were merely what I thought of after I read and it is your fic I have no intention of forcing my ideas upon u, I mean I am a stranger who only reads fanfics so yeah I just was curious and can't wait for you to continue with ur great ideas.

ooh damn this is sooooooo good, great start...sad but great and I soo cant wait to read more, please please update soon k??? pretty please??? I like this story alot and cant wait to see what happens next..hugggles and smiles Mija..:-)

wow... chap 2 was intense but hey keep going the plot is nerve racking

I guess a relationship can revolve around sex, but hopefully love can find Kagome and Inuyasha. Excellent start to your fic, Can't wait until you post more soon!!!

This is a very good story. i know Inuyasha is being too cruelt I t I think that he is starting to like her....afterall he don´t wanna share. He have to start to pleasure kagome in the intercourse...not before and then shove it in.
You are doing a very good story here and i like it very much.
Great plot...so please, udpate soon

Damn that bastard sesshomaru while i'm at it damn Inuyasha to Kagome needs a little lovin in her life. Well written story it is so sad, can't wait until you post more soon!!!

aw!! he's starting to act all protective and nice now that sesshoumaru's touched her...i'm really liken the corny chapter summaries u put up each chapter...reminds me of an old show where the announcer's all annoyin...lol
Good job!! Keep it up!!!
Ja ne, chica,
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Oh no! Poor Kagome. She had being raped by two 'GORGEOUS MEN"...I´m kidding. Nothing justify rape.
Why Inyasha are being protetive to her if he raped her at first? Why do he care? Why now.
And will Inuyasha let Sesshoumaru alone without some revenge?
Please, update soon...