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for Noble House

by Alijandrah

person Soranji
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* I guess its true. You can't stay friends with the opisite sex without sexually feelings coming in.
person Shinna
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update soon
person faychan \"Yura-yasha\"
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great addition to the story!!! *pants heavily* Jusve mve me the lemon soon! *moans loudly....* ^__^
person tate_wichippi
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed your story so far. When will you be able to update it? Don't listen to those people that don't no what they are talking about. I would like to see the two get together after Sango gets her revenge. So keep on writing.
person Sango
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi. i really liked your story but i have a few questions
1.about how far along is Sango?
2.does sango actually have her baby in the story?
3. what the fuck is wrong with sesshomaru???why did he rape her???
4.i need some ideas for my story that im writing(not the one posted on this site). i have a summary on it. here it is:

Sango leaves miroku after she catches him cheating on her with a 14 yr old prostitute. She takes her 13 month old son and goes to live with sesshomaru. She sleeps with him and gets pregnant. Sesshomaru loses his job because of him not being able to concentrate on anything but his unborn child and starts abusing Sango when she is about 4 months pregnant. He continues to hurt her until one day she has enough with him hurting her and her child and leaves him for the safety of her child and herself. She ends up going back to miroku even though he cheated and he takes her back. She is about 6 months pregnant when she goes back to miroku. She gives birth to a baby girl named Miyu a little more than 3 months later. on Miyu's 7th birthday kagura shows up to kill sango mir miroku. Miyu and her half brother kohaku decide to fight kagura so Sango and Miroku didnt get hurt(yes, Sango is pregnant again, but with miroku's child) and a battle to the death rages on.

ok thats my summary. could you please give me some other suggestions? my email is mirokusgirlsango9161986@yahoo.com, so please email your suggestions to me.

~amanda~
person ella
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. In fact I was hoping that Inuyasha and Sango would have sex. Awful me, huh?
person nekoyasha213
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sry won't do it again i didn't know:(please forgive me i'm really sorry
person punkrocker86
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice work. Please keep it up.
person Candace
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ITs not like any of the flamers are forced to read something that they don't agree on. If they don't like they don't have to read it. Personally I only reviewn I n I like something. I don't understand how someone can be so narrow minded. Anyway I hope you get well. And as for your story its one of the best things I have read on AFF.net. The character development is amazing and your writing is clear and it reads smoothly. I wish you could focus on Sango a bit more basically becasue she is my favorite character. On an end note don't write for others write becasue you enjoy it.
person Tom
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Don't fret over your surgeries you'll be fine. Doctors have better painkillers these days, hell I remeber when I got trapped behind a NVA division with a bullet stuck in my leg. Hurt like a sonuvbitch, so my First Sergeant simply put a bit in my mouth before cutting it out. That wound got me a three month sick leave. However as if to prove I hadn't learned anything I signed up for another tour. All in all I have Five Purple Hearts, a bronse Star, The Cross(Don't ask about that one as it still difficult to explain that one for it just involves so many more who deserved it more than me.).
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