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for Noble House

by Alijandrah

person Soranji
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I didn;t think Shess would care. I hope you write more soon. You seem to update rgularly
person Wren
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a killer fic! I was hooked right from the start with this awesome plot. Besides, I love Sango orientated fanfics. Keep up the great work. ^^
person soranji
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
need more
person faychan
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I can't wait for you to post another chapter or two; I'm very interested in where you're going with this storye. He. Hard to imagine Sess losing control like that, but for him to father a child through a human (granted a very stroarriarrior woman like Sango) is extremely intriguing. I also can't wait to see what happens with Kagome and Inuyasha's baby.

Happy Writing!

faychan
person Sera
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi!
just wanted to tell you that your story is really well, really intense written. i like darker stories, and i like yours very much. you caught the right pace, and even if *I* think that sess would never do something like that, you wrote the scene quite believable. what else is there to say? lovely inuyasha, lovely kagome, lovely shippo. they make such a kawai family! sango is interessting, too, i like your thoughts on her. I wounder if miroke will show up, too?
Just one tiny thing: i personally hope this won't turn out as a songo/inuyasha pairing...just not my thing, especially since he's already together with kagome. ...just my two cents.
Please continue this great fic, i'm really excited how everything will turn out.
*great job*
Sera
person Candace
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sango has to be my favorite character in the Inuyasha series. Its really nice to see more fics with her in them. Anyway about the story, its so good. Yes its tragic but the charcacters are nicly developed and the plot is intriging. Again I can't wait for more.
person Kurt Wagner
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very impressive Alijandra! You've managed to keep me on end during the whole 7 chapters I've read. I really wouldn't have seen that last one coming! You are very talented, no da. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next. Erg, I can't wait! Damned suspense... ^_^
person Faychan
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright, you are so completely twisted it isn't even funHeheHehe, I admire a fellow corrupted mind...needless to say I need and want more of this story. As far as the unusual parirings go I can see where you're going with the Sango/Inuyasha thing (that's if Sango agrees to said marriage thing). However, no matter how much Sess dislikes half-demons (mostly his brr frr from what we know of him) I have a hard time believing that he would abandon his heir. One last thing, THANK YOU for continuing the story, I would have had to hunt you down for that one! **Evil laugh and disappears into the darkness**

Faychan
person Ickabod119
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written story, Can't wait to see if Kagome allows Iunyasha to take Sango as his second wife and if even Inuyasha wants to. Please post more soon!!!
person youkai tsuki
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scared? Not at all. Interesting little story you have started here. Show me what you got.
The third chapter was easier to read (the spacing). you write and I'll read.



youkai tsuki