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by Alijandrah

person Kurt Wagner
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... That last part was so sweet. It seems like Sango would actually enjoy marrying Inu Yasha, rather than it just being a marriage of convenience... But Kagome surely wouldn't enjoy it.. Hm. Perplexing situation. There doesn't seem to be any really beneficial solution... That is one thing I don't get about men who marry more than one woman.. How can you love more than one and how would each of the wives feel? Wouldn't they be constantly jealous of one another? Odd... Anyway, excellent job again. Can't wait to see what happens next!
person Tom
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Semper Fidelis. Sango should just marry Inu Yasha that way Sesshoumaru can't hide her. Besides whichThey could work out a deal that is fair to all three of them.
person Faychan
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter as always. and i love the fact that i've got the inside scoop on some things! **insert evil laugh and bows to LadyAsria** can't wait till next time

faychan
person Tom
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sango deserves freedom. Have Inu Yasha marry her.
person Kurt Wagner
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GRR! You are indeed quite evil! I hope that your muse gives you a swift kick for that! lol, j/k. Another excellent chapter, as always. Is it possible for you to fail? I doubt it. Anyway, I hope the next chapter comes quickly. I ponder as to what course of action Sango will take... You can't keep us waiting too long, Cliffy Queen or not. Keep up the good work!
person Faychan
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
**Bows to LadyAsria and worships in adoring adoration** Great chapter as always, love the portrayl of inu and sango. Update soon please!

Faychan
person Kurt Wagner
schedule February 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O Now THAT is some good writing. I wouldn't think anything would happen betweeu Yau Yasha and Kagome because of her pregnancy, but you surprised me yet again. I must say that you have quite an imagination in that head of yours! Keep up the good work Alijandra!
person Faychan
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was definetly worth the wait! I love the way you portrayed Inuyasha there, his normal dominant attitude but you also showed him as a loving, caring husband. Wonderful scene there at the end ^__^ It's so true that so many woman feel unattractive when they are pregnant when the truth is (at least in my experience with my friends who have been pregnant and their husband/significant others can't seem to get enough of them!) that most men find their pregnant wife to be the most beautiful and sensual. And it might have something to do with the male ego of "I made that, me man" caveman thing, LOL!

Anyway, thanks for talking to me last night and I hope we get to talk again soon! Can't wait for the next chapter, til then!

Faychan
person Ickabod119
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First off great story secondly I was cringing in chapter ten thinking that Inuyasha would get sat to kingdom come for not answer a very moody Kagome and lastly I want to congratulate you none of the stories have had Kagome & Inuyasha having a sexual encounter when she was pregant so hat's off to youn'tn't wait until you post more soon!!!
person Sera
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hhh...that was HOT *vanishes for some desperatetly needed air....MORE PLEASE!