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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you brought in Kanna and Kagura. I usually hate Kagura, but the way her character is now, I'm hoping she does get with Mirkoku. More chapters soon, please.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how much I love this story and I can't not wait to get my hands on future chapters!! Keep up the great work!!
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i thouf suf sumthin u dont have to do it but this is my idea, have miroku and kagura hook up and be sorta of like parental figure to kanna
think about it inu/kag(half human/human) sess/sango(demon lord/demon hunter) kagu/miro(wind demon/monk with wind power) n e way i jus came up with that u dont have to use it. keep up the good work i like the story caait ait for more chaps.
think about it inu/kag(half human/human) sess/sango(demon lord/demon hunter) kagu/miro(wind demon/monk with wind power) n e way i jus came up with that u dont have to use it. keep up the good work i like the story caait ait for more chaps.
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dam You! Kouga is my favorite Char. mainly cause im a lot like him... besides that, keep doing what ur doing, this is a great stroy and i hope to see more
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very ,Very Cool,no no no - no break for you.You just have to update soon,pretty please! :)
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this entire fanfic. It was very interesting to find a sango/sesshomaru fanfic. It caught my attention very quickly! There are a few spelling and grammar errors but that gives the story character doesn't it now?!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The part with Rin was cute
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dear, maam, I just have to say that that fic was really cool! Although I got scared at the part where he threatened to chain Sango to the bed..... But I thought it was really something. Um, I just had a hard time telling the dialogues apart. With respect, um, could you please put " for when they talk? If it's too late, maam, it's a great fic, nonetheless! All foe the best, E.F. (^_^) 15yrs.
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February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To Eva Finalea
Hiya...
No I will not use ".." for the dialouges, because I have been taught to use a - in front of dialouges, so I will use that.
For me the "..." is thoughts... If I do it the other way I will only confuse my self... Sorry, but this is how we write novels in Sweden most of the time...
Tanks for the review..
/Atropa
Hiya...
No I will not use ".." for the dialouges, because I have been taught to use a - in front of dialouges, so I will use that.
For me the "..." is thoughts... If I do it the other way I will only confuse my self... Sorry, but this is how we write novels in Sweden most of the time...
Tanks for the review..
/Atropa