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April 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM
It was good but if you had a bata it would be better all the was and is when you needed were and are things like the singular and plural or tenses geting confused but that is comon and I have Gotten through much worse than yours
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March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story, i hope you write many more as good and long as this was.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great i love it i read is all in one sitting .. i cant wait to read more of your work ... later for now
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My favorite story yet
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what about inuyasha and kagome baby what did they have you can't finish it without that. But other than that great job i loved every minute of it.
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is with out a dout the abslute best sess son i have ever read so thank you for writing it
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm off to lala land. I did start your story, but I didn't want to be rude. I'll start again at the beginning and leave another review. For now, just know that I like what I see.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one of the best stories ever keep writting!
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I love how you've changed Sesshomarou's personality slowly because of Sango.. Made me cry when he cried XD.
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am no fanfiction writer but i must say that the story was wonderful.keep up the good work! 10 on 10 from my side.best of luck if planning to write more.