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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's ok, but you need to work on your lemons, you made miroku and sangos a little hot,
but inuyasha and kagome was boring i'm not trying to hurt you why don't you read blood&tears then you will get what i'm trying to get at ok i did love the beginning
but inuyasha and kagome was boring i'm not trying to hurt you why don't you read blood&tears then you will get what i'm trying to get at ok i did love the beginning
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a awsome story totaly wicked but i liked it more when the kids were still babys it went to fast
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was great! Except the sucking on the ear lobe part. Inuyasha doesn't have earlobes.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was an awesome story nice details(heh heh)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was going along REALLY well until you started moving time ahead WAY too fast. Chapter 5 could have been sectioned up into let's say 3-4 chapters which would have made it a little easier to understand. At one point I was saying "Who's 13 years old now?" I would consider revising it and making it a little longer so that the reader has time to adjust to the change in time in the story! It's great otherwise...just hard to follow in Chapter 5.
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February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I read your story and I was surprised to see my name in it. hehe. IT's a very good story, if a bit short.
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February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terrific story from beginning, middle and end. Great job and thanks for the great read.
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very sweet. Wouldn't it be fun if Koga has a son and makes a play for Miki, just after Kohaku realizes that he loves her. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Why stop there? Continue Please!!!!!!!