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for Descendent of Inuyasha

by Cloud802

person ladyfang_05
schedule August 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was so beautiful(tear)
person Morlana
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The stock Botan sits on is an oar. It fits since she's teh incarnation of death. And death ferries the dead across the river Styx that she'd need an oar rather then a scythe. Scythe is teh stick with the curved blade.
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ * pounces * Yay! You updated! This was a good chapter! I just wished I'd re-read past chapters..I'm just a tad bit usedused! Heh heh! ^_^;; Anyhoo, it was all good. I just hope we don't have to wait long for the next chapter! Until next time! ^_^
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far. Though I have to say one chapter confused the hell out of me as to what happened. But I'll just re-read it and maybe it'll make some sense. Anyhoo, great chapter and I can't wait til you update again. Until next time! ^_^
person DarkLady
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
might as well throw my two cent in.

It's a really good story line kind of reminds me of reni in Sailor Moon, when she comes back to save her parents, as much bashing as SM gets its a good anime, and this is a good fic i hope you continue the story so i can keep enjoying it ^_^
person Manda
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill the bunny, take me instead!! *stops and thinks over that last statement* Actaully never, I've grown kinda fond of living. Anyhoo, good story, I like your save that demon kids take 2-3 months to grow in the womb...but this one will be 1/4 demon, so shouldn't it take longer (though maybe not 9 monthes)? And the idea of Sess having to explain sex to Rin, oh man, I can't wait to read that! UPDATE SOON!!!!! *chases you and frees the little bunny* The bunny is now free! yay!
person Ickabod119
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You are one of the few author's who has combined Inu/YuYu and kept classic ingsings so I praise you I mean I like Hiei and Kurama and all but their just is no subsitute for Inuyasha. Can't wait until you post more soon!!!
person a
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person Nina
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even though I like this story, I don't understand why Inuyasha wanted to take a vacation by going to school for several weeks. It makes no sense at all, especially when Naraku is still around and there are shards to be found. Also, the Yu Yu gang hasn't done shit so far except to lay around the hut. Maybe you could involved them a little more. Maybe for fun throw in a pairing of Koga and Yusuke. Now that has never been done before.
person Flying Hope
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! HOW COULD YOU KILL KAGURA!?! *runs away crying senseless into the sunset*