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for Kagome's New Baby Brother!

by jeffshelton

person The Pink Fuzzy Elephant
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It would seem that just as every dog has his day, so that of our favorite hentai houshi has come at last! (he has finally gotten his hands on a porno mag with high definition photographs! ^__^;)
person me
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lmgdao! The last part was pure Miroku...-_O Nicely done.
person Naheta
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job, i havent a cule as to where you come up with this stuff, but i hope you never stop.

Naheta
person dragonflyelj
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderful Jeff! the idea of Kagome's mother doing that is so sweet, and you just got Miroku PEGGED!!! that last little bit, Miroku, totally!!! You had a lot of really sweet parts in this story, with the obvious angst that Sango was feeling, and then she kissed him! It would be interesting to know what kond of spiritual powers that Miroku Jr. has, between being born of the Higarashi family, and of Miroku who has some pretty good spiritual skills himself.
person megh
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your imagination never fails to astound me. :P This should be interesting!
person element
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story i like the concept and am curious about more chapters
person Mija
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh another wonderfull chapter and fic from you Jeffs...I love it as I love them all, this was an interesting twisnt and I do hope u add more in the future, wish I could give ya a longer update but Im sink and just reading and giving small reviews to let my fav authors know I did read and enjoy emmensly..sorry my spelling suck anyhow great story much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person akumu
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful jeffs! another great fiction by you! i'm hooked....xP