rate_review Reviews

Good story, but there nothing I hate more than a cold bicth or in inuyasha's case a bastard. A fuck between long time friends is rarely ever just a fuck. Biology takes over and memories are begged to be made, in the case of inuyasha he is extremily territorial, if I were to go wandering he would surely kill whoever I hooked up with. Sex doesnt equal love, but between close friends it either deepens the friendship to almost the point of love or deep admiration or it completely destroys it. I like your writing style please continue so I may be encourage to someday finish my own story. Drop me a line if you need some encouragement.
Signed,
Miroku
(P.S. not in any way linked to the viz corporation except for the fact that they own me; views expressed by Miroku don't neccessarily reflect those of Rumiko Takahakshi or Kirby Morrow)

definitely continue it! it's just too hot to be dropped as a one shot! oh btw, i LOVED it ! XD

I applaud you. I've always been a Miroku fan and am a yaoi lover myself. I would like to see a continuation of this. The way you ended it seems as if the story should go on, if you did intend it to be a one-shot. I would also like to compliment you on your abilities at writing an AU fic. Others I have read put characters into situations that just don't seem right but I think you've managed putting Feudal Era characters intothe present age quite well.

~Ermine White

yey! i liked it! you should keep goin!

Really good ^^ the detail was fantastic and I liked how you made them in character. Inuyasha was hilarious at the end. Please sequal!

i liked it. i would like to see miroku feeling confused about whether this meant anything to inuyasha in the next chapter..

jgvh

I do wish you would continue. I love it so far, and it was well written. There are so few Inu/Miro fics it's sad. Keep up the good work regardless.

~Danielle~

I think you should continue it. When Inuyasha comes to his senses, will he push Miroku away, or is this just the begining of a beautiful relationship? Was it more than just a drunken fuck?(love those...)

umm.....a second chapie would be nice. So we could se if its a dissapointing ending or somthing....^_^ in a way i thought the whole sesshomaru..(did i spell that right) was kinda funny