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for Look What the Rain Brought In

by Hollychan

person Etimesf
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great descriptions! fufufu
I know you! You're Holly right? erm...holly holly. the holly with the miroku stick. I think....0.o tell me if I'm correct
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Go with it! Okay I know it's been a while since you wrote this but it has to go on!
person cm34
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great until the very end when shame and resentment set in and then lost hope its unfortunate but sex too often love will follow; deep hurt being a cousin. but i did enjoy the sex very realistic all of it was
person Horong
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cool!! I loved it! I know some people don't read anything besides the more "canon-based" or much-closer to canon fanfictions. I want to tell u I used to be, until now! ^^ The modern types, now I learned, are quite fun too! I loved it! Lurved it!! I urge you to continue! If you are still active, of course -.- Ciao for now!!^^ Rock on!
person Catgurl161(not logged in)
schedule July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh heh getting drunk is fun, never threw up though, great fic by they way
person Sinead
schedule May 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, whatever you do with it will be fine by me. However, if you want my most true and honest opinion: as many stories as there are on this site, few I have seen that are so well written as this. It is such sweet sorrow when they end so soon. If you should decide to continue.... YAAAAY!! And if not it was a good place to simply leave it as a one-shot. I'm sure that in my mind I could create a hundred different storylines (though none would feel as authentic as if I had read them from this site from the papers from your mind). Alright, I'm done with my mindless ramblings. Thank you for the wonderful story and the time.
person jessie
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ya you should defently continue it was cute and i'd like to see more.
person Anon
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was sexy....*daydreams about a miroku/inuyasha bath scene*.....*drool*...
person snowfall
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this fic. It's hot and I like Inu/Mir pairings. I know that this is an old fic, but would like to see it continued. I can see the possibility for angst with Miroku falling in love with Inu and Inu denying his feelings for Miroku.

Thanks,

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person blahblahblah
schedule February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You must continue it the fate of the two characters and (my free time) rests in your hands.

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