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for Shatter

by Clockworkknight

person sil3nt_r3tribution ..not logged in
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it but it made me cry
person kinky lurker
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
okay...

this was a beautifully written, well done example of a dark-fic. and i'm loving everything i've seen so far. i can not wait to read the next chapter, i know it will be very well done. i know that it will be beautiufully written, beautfully composed adn i know that i shall enjoy every minute of it.

update soon, onegai!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blink-blink* wow.. I can blink now!
Whoa dark ass story!!! Love it!!
I hope you haven’t given up on this story!!
person Nevermind
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice storytelling I'm very interested to see what happens to Inu---please write more---
person MEGS
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE! CONTINUE! CONTINUE!
person Caitriona
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't particularly like what you did to Inuyasha, but damn....the way you did it. Your language is colorful and well written. The situation was seemingly well thought out. Love it!

I hope, though since it hasn't been updated since april I somehow doubt it, that you will continue with this fic. Don't leave Inu beat up and bloody.

Caitriona
person richonyx
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story...dark and unforgiving. I'd love it if you finished it. I really want to know what happened!
person Nina
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really interesting. Poor Inuyasha. Bad Sesshy. He needs to be spanked. Can't wait to see what develops between Sango and Inuyasha. But were are the rest of the gang?
person Shinna
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person Soulchan
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Soul~chan: Update! ::dances:: Sorry to hear about your depression, but take comfort in the fact thaur sur stories are A1!
Kuru: Mlouslous as always. Nice touch explaining why Inu-yasha's injuries are affecting him more than usual.
Soul~chan: Yeah! Most people have him get knocked one and start crying and peripering like a little baby. They seem to forget he gets his liver torn out on a regular basis.
Kuru: You're really not going with her suggestion of hurt/comfort with San-chan are you?
Soul~chan: I do love the canon pairings and yaoi of course, but there's just something so intriguing about Inu-yasha/Sango or Sango with anyone of demon ancestry for that matter. Chalk it all up to the fact that she's supposed to kill 'em, makes for good conflict.
Kuru: Thanks again for this gorgeous story and please ::is begging on knees:: when you find a moment, update Roads to Ruin.
Soul~chan: Hugs to Inu-yasha. I don't care where he gets his comfort from, just as long as he gets it ::wink::
Huggles,
Soul~chan and Kuruijini