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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't bad, but it needs to have longer chapters. Also, it needs more depth. For instance, you can go into detail about why Kagome ran from Inuyasha, when he was obviously the closest one to her out of the entire story. Also, why did Sesshoumaru actually sleep with her? How did Rin know? Why did Kagome actually shoot Kouga? You don't really answer these questions.
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August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god u degrace us with this peace of trash.. u had it alright until u let her willingly turn herself into a whore... im guessing u must be one and play out what happens to u through this story .. oh god im about to get sick pl delete this story these are the reason's AFF.net is doing so bad ... we need better storys then this trash
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL ITS BEEN A YEAR AN THIS IS ALL THE REVIEWS U HAVE! see why dont u just take my advice an get ride of this crap
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story it's sooo good you have to update it soon and when you do can you e-mail me and tell me thanks tootles
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what the hell? you'd better give us readers some explanations for what's going on soon, cuz it's truly mind-boggling :)
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This Time frame Rin is 15 and Kagome is going on 19. i know it sounds odd but I don't want Kagome to be in her twenties just yet. and Inuyasha isn't going after her because well... she left him and you'll find out later what happens to him in the fic. The reason she's so distant from Kouga is because she's changed in her outer appearance and is frightened about that change so at the moment she doesn't trust anyone. I'm glady you all like this fic I will be adding more soon when I have time from my work and school.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot. But what is the time frame? You said Rin was a teenager. So how old is Kag now? And why hasn't Inu come looking for her? And why does she act like she barely knows Koga when in fact they're great friends? I do really like this story very much. I'm just curious to have gaps filled in, that's all. Sorry to ask so many question? Looking forward to the next chapters.