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for New Mission

by Mija

person Birdy
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 12

Wow now thats basic thinking
person madmiko
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! I've read it twice this week. Since it's been so long since it was updated, I hope you have finished it maybe on another site. Great plot, good characterizations, nice balance of relationships. If you haven't finished it somewhere, I hope you do so!
person Crimsondrop7
schedule January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Crimsondrop7 (writer on FanFiciton.net) says that ur story is good! You've got to keep writing! You have me hanging on the edge here. Too bad this can't go on FF.net.
person Anon
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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update soon onegai!!
ja ne
K
person demonqueen
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I would let you know that I like your story. Hope you will update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next. Am I correct in thinking that since Kagome is marked but not mated yet that all demon's will be trying to come for her,etc. If so,why? Is the unfinished mating mark kind of like pheromones to attract a potential mate?? Hiei seems to be like Sesshomaru in his dislike of humans. Why is this? Has he had a bad experience with humans in his past? Or is it just kind of like a racial thing? Anyway, good story. Please keep coming with future chapters. I would like to see how this story progresses and how it will end.
person Nefiset
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on when are you going to update?!It seems like years since you did last. I want to know what happens next.
person Kuramasbluegurl
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey thanks for the update
i liked it, even though it was short. It was still good
thanks again
and a merry christmas and happy new year to you too
person Fornax
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was unkind. I was hoping for a lemon! Oh well, you are the author.
person Megan Consoer
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person crimsondrop7 from fanfiction.net/
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your story is great! Wish i could write like that! Very realistic. I can practically see it. I would really, really, REALLY, like to see the next chapter or...

YE SHALL ALL DIE!!! MUWHAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHHHHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAA!!!

i have a slight lemon story at the begining on fanfiction.net and might do it a real lemon later, can you read it and review? And perhaps, give me a few suggestions? It's on www.fanfiction.net/ & in Yu Yu Hakusho, called To Get Away.