rate_review Reviews

I loved it, so lemony! I'll read more of youcs tcs tomorrow. By the way, sorry on not updating, I'll have the next few chaps up by Sunday night.

And THIS is why i like slash. the slash writers seem to have a much er ger grip on the english language than het writers, your fic reminded me of that strange-but-valid fact. Very good for a slash (tho i still like the hetero couples better XP) and you rated this.. what was it? R? prolly could have used an NC-17, but who cares? its an adult archive anyway, the ratings don't really matter here.
ke yke your writing style, so... well... good job an all :) i'll prolly be looking in to your other stuff if's i find it.

sorry, i didn't put my name... now you feel like you got 2 reviews in one! HUZZAH!
And THIS is why i like slash. the slash writers seem to have a much better grip on the english language than het writers, your fic reminded me of that strange-but-valid fact. Very good for a slash (tho i still like the hetero couples better XP) and you rated this.. what was it? R? prolly could have used an NC-17, but who cares? its an adult archive anyway, the ratings don't really matter here.
I like your writing style, so... well... good job an all :) i'll prolly be looking in to your other stuff if's i find it.

Yuji: Oh god! Thank you! That was so nice.
Yumi: God! I loved it! It was nice and kinky and horny!
Yuji: Your really nice thank you for your nice fic. We're going to ge read the other one Bye
Yumi: Keep writing that was a great kinky idea!

Awesome!