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for By the Swing of the Sword

by Darkswansong

person Anon
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to finish this story? I look ever so often and I am getting very frustrated. You PROMISED to change CArine into Kagura. When are you going to do it?
person kimiko sakaki
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dont see alot of inukag chappies, mostly sesscar...but it's still nice. XD
person inufa625
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really good. I am so glad I stumbled upon this. I eagerly wait for your next update.
person shrew
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank the lord and the lady you finally updated! i love your story! i hope you update super soon...but if you can't, Shrew compleatly understands...she will just cry then...
person sutlesarcasm
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it is so good to see your voice again. I started reading this fic a long time ago, and when I clicked on your name, I found 'Check and Checkmate'. I thoroughly enjoyed both, and then you put up 'Snap goes the safety net'. I guess I'm just a fool for your work. I really enjoy your writing style. Strong women, strong men, lots of humor (love humor), a tiny bit of angst, more humor, great plots and dialog. I hope you someday finish 'Check and Checkmate', you haven't done anything on that since 2003. It was just getting good. I still haven't figured out why Sess didn't mark Carine. I really like her. I hope you update soon.
person Anon
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Irealy love the story
person Anon
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to finish this?
person hurry
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
will you fucking update already i want the next chapy now please
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It said you updated on the 4/15/05. The last two chapters are the same from when you updated the last time. What's up?
person Alia
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok..I was surprised, usually with the plot line, and the genre, I was thinking poor fic, for your sake, I was wrong. It was good, drew you into the characters, and shows potential. I think you need more character POV, emotional drama, details and longer chapters. I do hope Sesshoumaru has more stamina, once? Pah.....pathetic.....more than once (GREAT), but that's your decision, and do draw more into physical sensation, there was no tingling, warmth, tightening, anxiety, ache or pain.......That is all I have to say.