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for Hello Again

by DelKaidin

person Kaye
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was... unique in the thoughts of youkai mating. I really liked the chapter. They FINALLY were able to mate! Excellent chapter, I loved it!
person KagoKitty
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ol, tl, that's so creative!! and she called him her *snort* sex slave again.
beautiful ending!! Muy bien!!
toodles with noodles,
=^-.~^=
person stella
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yahoo, they finally got it on. it was so sweet and loving. can't wait to see what happens next.
person Naheta
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
see that chap turned out fine it was great del


Naheta
person New Fan
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that was not the end. I have a question. Does Rin's
mark means marriage. Please let me know. Update soon.
person youkai tsuki
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jeez louise, trust Inu to follow up sweet lovemaking with plunging his claws through
his chest. Ok now that my breathing is back to normal


youkai tsuki
person Stefanie
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! Finally they are together! Is this the ending though? I would read more if you wrote it...but if is is suppose to be the end then i will be happy. ^_^ I totally love this story! So update soon if your going to.
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh at last and now they are fully mated and i loved how you did that!!! I can't wait for the next chapter, Inuyasha's turn to get the treatment lol ^.^

Angie
person thoughts
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful story. I like how you have introduced a out of character Inuyasha in a way that makes him seem in character. I confess to being drawn to stories about people rather than fighting/conflicts. Thanks for a good read.
person stella
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bring on the love baby. finally they get some loving done. good job as always, keep it up