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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thought I'd review before I forget about what I wanted to say...
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First of all, THIS is definitely a story that adults can get into! It has a good storyline, good characteriza and and it flows nicely.
It's actually like a good Drama on TV, only you're reading it on the screen.
Second, I thought that was a nice touch with the pictures, done differently from what I'm used to ng. ng.
Third, I TRULY enjoyed that song at the end of chap. 9, I haven't heard that song in 20 years. Damn that's a long time...but I was smiling but I know how funny that song is to hear.
Fourth, since I'm JUST getting into this, I'll review more, but I liked how you nicely bridged a gap between Kagome & Sesshoumaru, without all the unnecessary explanations, so now you have 2 people who understand each other and truly miss someone who is dear to them both.
Well, that's enough for now...
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First of all, THIS is definitely a story that adults can get into! It has a good storyline, good characteriza and and it flows nicely.
It's actually like a good Drama on TV, only you're reading it on the screen.
Second, I thought that was a nice touch with the pictures, done differently from what I'm used to ng. ng.
Third, I TRULY enjoyed that song at the end of chap. 9, I haven't heard that song in 20 years. Damn that's a long time...but I was smiling but I know how funny that song is to hear.
Fourth, since I'm JUST getting into this, I'll review more, but I liked how you nicely bridged a gap between Kagome & Sesshoumaru, without all the unnecessary explanations, so now you have 2 people who understand each other and truly miss someone who is dear to them both.
Well, that's enough for now...
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
REPOST
thought I'd review before I forget about what I wanted to ..
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First of all, THIS is definitely a story that adults can get into! It has a good storyline, good characterization and it flows nicely.
It's actually like a good Drama on TV, only you're reading it on the screen.
Second, I thought that was a nice touch with the pictures, done differently from what I'm used to seeing.
Third, I TRULY enjoyed that song at the end of chap. 9, I haven't heard that song in 20 years. Damn that's a long time...but I was smiling but I know how funny that song is to hear.
Fourth, since I'm JUST getting into this, I'll review more, but I liked how you nicely bridged a gap between Kagome & Sesshoumaru, without all the unnecessary explanations, so now you have 2 people who rstarstand each other and truly miss someone who is dear to them both.
Well, that's enough for now...
thought I'd review before I forget about what I wanted to ..
..
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First of all, THIS is definitely a story that adults can get into! It has a good storyline, good characterization and it flows nicely.
It's actually like a good Drama on TV, only you're reading it on the screen.
Second, I thought that was a nice touch with the pictures, done differently from what I'm used to seeing.
Third, I TRULY enjoyed that song at the end of chap. 9, I haven't heard that song in 20 years. Damn that's a long time...but I was smiling but I know how funny that song is to hear.
Fourth, since I'm JUST getting into this, I'll review more, but I liked how you nicely bridged a gap between Kagome & Sesshoumaru, without all the unnecessary explanations, so now you have 2 people who rstarstand each other and truly miss someone who is dear to them both.
Well, that's enough for now...
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*applause, applause, give you 12 curtain calls* Now that's Inu/Kag story, well-written with charcterization and humor. I fell off my chair laughing when Kagome told Inu-yasha "My father used to say righty-tighty, lefty-loosey." and when he turned it left the nut came loose. And the part when he told her friends that he was her willing sex slave, I can only imagine the look on their faces. It's not everyday a guy is willing to admit that ;) Anyway, wonderful job, beautiful work. And congrats on 400+ reviews.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
words escape me, i am absolutly speechless at this masterpiece, ive read well over 2000 fanfics in the last 4 years but this is defintly one of the most elaborte and well written of them, ur devotion to the characters and tehs toyboard shows firmly. Congratulations and while one reviewer mayu not mean a lot to you, feel satisfied that you have brightned the lives of all around you with won wonderful work of fiction...
Congradulations and continue wrtiting!
Congradulations and continue wrtiting!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew....What a saga!!!! Truely enjoyed it!! Now I can go to bed knowing I finished the whole story!!!! Looking forward to more of your stories!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! GREAT STORY!!! me likes alot... great ending... i liked your ceremony! lol haha. That was a very good story.... i must add to favs...lol great job!!
Luv ya much
Huggles
~Liz~
Luv ya much
Huggles
~Liz~
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i've been following your story for months, and what an ending! it's absolutely terrific. i sincerely hope that you keep writinhe the talent and love for the written word is clearly evident. best of luck to ya.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job, Del!
did did a great job of turning such a sad storyo a o a happy one. ^-^
I haven't been doing much fan fiction reading recently, but this is one of the better stories I've read recently. Heh, maybe I just have a thing for drawn out Inu*Kag fics...
The general plot wasn't too intresting when you look at it. That's probably due to how many times reattaing love after gaining amnesia has been done in stories before, but you write well enough that it's actually pretty intrest Ne Needless to say you were very creative with some of the aspects of the story such as the marking process. The theme I found was a standard one you see in most love stories, but "love triumphs over everything else" is romantic and inspiring, so you don't get counted off. The only thing I really found wrong was that some parts like the club scene were hard to follow and understand. Maybe it was because it was two in the morning when I read that scene or something, but it just didn't seem make much sense at all in my head other than Inu Yasha transforming, some senseless beating around, and then frantically going home.
Now that you've finished this, I think you should go back and finish "Aburana." That story just seemed to be getting somewhere when you suddenly stopped updating it after the seventh chapter. It would mean alot to me if you did finish it. You were managing to capture a whole level of emoti did didn't think was possible for fiction and giving people something to really think over.
did did a great job of turning such a sad storyo a o a happy one. ^-^
I haven't been doing much fan fiction reading recently, but this is one of the better stories I've read recently. Heh, maybe I just have a thing for drawn out Inu*Kag fics...
The general plot wasn't too intresting when you look at it. That's probably due to how many times reattaing love after gaining amnesia has been done in stories before, but you write well enough that it's actually pretty intrest Ne Needless to say you were very creative with some of the aspects of the story such as the marking process. The theme I found was a standard one you see in most love stories, but "love triumphs over everything else" is romantic and inspiring, so you don't get counted off. The only thing I really found wrong was that some parts like the club scene were hard to follow and understand. Maybe it was because it was two in the morning when I read that scene or something, but it just didn't seem make much sense at all in my head other than Inu Yasha transforming, some senseless beating around, and then frantically going home.
Now that you've finished this, I think you should go back and finish "Aburana." That story just seemed to be getting somewhere when you suddenly stopped updating it after the seventh chapter. It would mean alot to me if you did finish it. You were managing to capture a whole level of emoti did didn't think was possible for fiction and giving people something to really think over.
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww,happily ever after.Del,there aren't enough words to describe how I feel...you took me on an emotional rollercoaster through the entire story,and I thank you for that...I always enjoy a story that touches the emotions,and you did just that with HA.
I really lforwforward to rng yng your future stories and your ones in progress.Your works are always enjoyable.
Huggles;
Khell
I really lforwforward to rng yng your future stories and your ones in progress.Your works are always enjoyable.
Huggles;
Khell
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for finishing the story, it was worth the almost daily checking at aff.net. :)