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by DelKaidin

person Ras
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?????!!!!!!!!!!! IT WAS A DREAM?????????!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *BREATH*NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.


ACK...IRK......DIEINGG.G...........................








happy, now, this is ras' alter ego. you have killed poor ras with your DREAM SEQUENCE! A DREAM SEQUENCE!!!!!!!!!
(actually it was one of the best dream sequences I have ever read but still). IT WAS A DREAM.! the whole time poor ras
was reading it, she was like jumping up and down that Inuyasha was actually in her bedroom and had remembered
everything! RAS WAS DROOLING!!!! now you have gone and killed poor ras. as her alter ego I must go revive her now.
*shakes head*


*ras is brought back from the dead*
cough...eh? what? where am I? Oh....yeah, I remember. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! IT WAS A DREAM!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

ack....ehem....okay, I am better now. all in all you had me on the edge of my seat completely tranced and then poof! it was
a dream....a dream....

Del. One of the best and I mean it. one of the best I have ever read. Even though I died I am a glutton for more of this
great strory. Genious. simply genious.



Till next time I die, Ras~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
person Kaye
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She is under WAY too much stress. I'm really proud of Kagome's control, she didn't just waltz into Inuyasha room and tell him everything. Wow, she has control. Good chapter, it was actually really funny. Keep it up!
person RAPluvsDBZ
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was cruel!!!!! I thought Inu Yasha had really remembered, and then you made it a dream.......I was really ready to believe he had remembered,and then Kenmaru popped in and BAM...dream ends!!!! Anyways keep writing this story, I live for it, I have really enjoyed it, I just wish it came out a bit faster, but you cant rush genuis, ne?
Thanks for a great read, RAPluvsDBZ
person youkai tsuki
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I have had vivid dreams before but not like that. Not to the point where I had
to retreive BOB (battery operated boyfriend). That was a great chapter Del. I enjoyed
it. See you next chapter!!

youkai tsuki
person New Fan
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that Kagome need to tell Inuyasha. Update soon.
person snowfall
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent plot development. Glad you are not in a rush to finish the story.
person dragonflyelj
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi del, as always, I love your story, can't wait to read more! Oh, and did I say thank you to you for your regular updates? If not thank you. Huggles, chat with you soon!
person Soranji
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like Genken. He reminds me of Hojo for some reason. He seems Simple minded.
person Stefanie
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! I NEED MORE! Im totally in love with this story. Im gonna maure ure I read it all the way through once it is finished ^_^.
person Babsie
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Damn Sesshoumaru had to ear what Genken was telling Inuyasha...I would love to know how Inuyasha would react and Kagome would not being mad with Genken because it was really nos his falt. Damn Sesshou...:-(
Another thought ...Inuyasha could just sit in a chair looking to Kenmaru...imagining by the boys image how his father could be hehehehehe
Please, update soon