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for Hello Again

by DelKaidin

person Jaxomruth
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I can't wait for the next chapter. You've done a really great job. I am curious if Shippo will make an apperance in the story any time soon. Both he and Kiala should still be alive since they are both youkai. How long before the rest of Inu-Yasha's memories come back?
person KagoKitty
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH HA!! Hallelujah Inuyasha!! her willing sex slave indeed...
=^-.~^=
person Kaye
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wait, Inuyasha doesn't really beileve he's just that to Kagome right? He can't seriously beileve, oh poor Inuyasha. I thought she had straightened that all out. Well Yuka and Eri are truly little bitches, they should have been slapped! Making Inumaru. I . I hate people who are so judgemental! Good chapter! I liked it a lot, even if the last line made me feel bad for Inuyasha. And also, was it the night of no moon? I figure Inuyasha and Inumaru don't turn human on the same night. I just thought since Inuyasha had violet eyes. Well anyway good chapter! Keep it up!
person Khellendros
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man, those two are ys gys getting interrupted...lol...poor things they are going to be sooo frusterated! I bet Kag is looking forward to those remaining kisses,huh?Sounds like she'll need them...

Until later,huggles;
Khell
person sayin_girl
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Twitch* that was mean. *Twitch, twitch* please don't so that to me again. For the love of all things holy, the sexual tension going on between those two has even ME in a constant state of frustration! How can you stand to write it?! Or do you enjoy torturing your innocent readers? *Narrows eyes suspiciously* PLEASE I beg of you, give them some release soon! something! Anything! but aside from all of this you have managed to churn out yet another superb chapter, I can't wait for more. Toodles
person lynns
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was searching for a good story and low and behold the continuation for 'Goodbyes'! I just loved that story, it almost made me cry and now inu's back yeah! oh please keep going wihis his story, i want to know if Inu finds out about is son, please e-mail me when you update, please!
thanks alot
Lynns
person KagoKitty
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
for a second there i thought you were gonna just go ahead and count ALL the ki...h...hm, *wink* you coulda pulled it off...
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person New Fan
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can not leave us dangling with chapter I want a read the next chapter
sooooooooon. Update please. ^_^
person Mija
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg Del you are KILLINGGGGGG ME here...lmaooo just when it was getting good...damn poor frustrated Inu...hehe I take care of him..*grins and drools* ok ok another great but frustrating chap my friend I love it and cant wait for an update...lubs ya talks to ya soon huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person Snowfall
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Pant, pant. What I wouldn't give to have a lover like that! You must make him start all over at one.