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by DelKaidin

person Mules
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Dell.... Well I made it and finally read it and oh yeah loved it.... he he.... and now moving on to Hello.... this was very nicely writen and I am surprised that Inu Left her .... that bad puppy.... but I guess I must read the other to see what happens so I am.... May take me awhile my reading time is limited right now while on the road but giving it a shot to catch up.... So I know whats going on in chat...lol.... But anyway wanted to let you know Loved this and can't wait to read the other.... Great Job girly..... Keep it up...

Mules
person Marieka
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AW! Man! You made me cry! *sniffel* Now I need a hanky!
TY for the great story!
person Babsie
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW
This was a grgreagreat start...
What Inuyasha told Kagome? Did he know that she have a pup?Did he really go to hell with the clay pot...ups..Kikyou?
Please, update soon
person KhellendrostheDragon
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hiya Del, I loved it.It lme tme teary eyed at the end,actually I was teary eyed on and off through the whole thing.

Huggles;
Khell
person Blue Saiyan Angel
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sniff, sniff. So beautiful, yet so sad.
person animechick262003
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*SOBS* Sits here with a tissue. Gods I wish I could write something so mving. Something so heartfelt, but at last that gift is given to a chosen few, and I have only seen two of you on this site thus far. Good Job! You and Ras have to be the only writers to ever make me cry this hard. I envy your gift but I can not deny truth. GENIUS pure and simple. Thanks for the excellent read doesnt happen often. Chat ya later.




Kiea


aka animechick262003
person Chiruken
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sad, very touching. A heartwarming...and heartwrenching...story of the love of Kagome and Iuyasha. Honor and love...ahhh...beautifully written.

^_^x

Chiruken
person Nyoko
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, that was a sad story. I am cring.Why did InuYasha have to go? Is there going to be another chapter. There should be another chapter.
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful.
person Kaida
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is so beautiful my friend. Oh, so beautiful.