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May 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hehehe i really like this story ^_~ its awsome not many people actuly give inuyasha dog like items other than his ears and as far as the "candy" awsome little plot twist lol ive actully sliped one of those to my bf befor and the results were OMFG funny. im happy someone actully put something like that in to a fic.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...
This was a good read; but I have to tell you about some of the things that didn't work for this story.
Good explanation about Inyuasha calling Kagome a bitch. I can understand the reference it meant by him being a 'dog' and all... but I felt it was used too much and it kinda killed his personality. I can see him saying it once (in the heat of passion), but he said it well over three times... it was really out of character.
Overall, seven out of 10 stars. You did well.
This was a good read; but I have to tell you about some of the things that didn't work for this story.
Good explanation about Inyuasha calling Kagome a bitch. I can understand the reference it meant by him being a 'dog' and all... but I felt it was used too much and it kinda killed his personality. I can see him saying it once (in the heat of passion), but he said it well over three times... it was really out of character.
Overall, seven out of 10 stars. You did well.
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November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it!! I don't get it when everyone complains about Inuyasha calling Kagome 'his' bitch. I kinda think it's fun...I wouldn't mind it. It is different when he calls her 'a' bitch...but that didn't happen in this story. Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! Still can't stop smiling!!
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well written story and the point about the knot was a unique turn and something I've thought about recently myself. Maybe write a sequel to this story in the future.
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow very good
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March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you sd cod continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice...... really nice....I liked the length of it.. i find to many lemons short..a d to quick happening between characters. I speically like the Anime side of Inu.. some people seem to forget hes half demon.... The bitch comments were a little tense .. but very approprite i would say
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. And I understand very well how you were using the word "bitch" in your fic. It was appropriate, especially since you did the whole dog mating thing. I found the entire story extremely erotic. Great job.
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March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
True Inuyasha is a Dog hanyou, but he was also raised by a human woman. At least for the first 6-10 years of life. He knows little to nothing of youkai culture so it's highly unlikely that his use of bitch is innocent.
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting peice of work. I never read a lemon before where Inuyasha knots. Interesting and well done. I hope you write more.